Lonely Without You!

Marie as always a good girl. She did what she was asked and was just like her older brother. At least that's how things were before everything changed. Liam (her brother) left for X Factor. Now, she is considered a 'bad girl' and a 'heart-breaker' everyone knows that she changed (expect Liam) but everyone falls for her. But, she doesn't have crushes and she promised herself that she would never fall in love. She doesn't let people in because she is afraid to get hurt. But one boy by the name Louis Tomlinson might just change all of that. Will she let him in or ignore her feelings and just blow him off?




This is my first story so tell me what you think. Thx

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3. Running into Trouble

I walked into my favorite club. The reason i love this place so much is because every night they have a open mic night you can sing anything or just get up and talk. I only really came here when i needed to forget something. I got up on stage and started to sing a song that i wrote that i named Notice Me ( if you can listen to this song its by David Archuleta) "I try to find the words when you walk by Words just cant explain the way i feel inside My friends keep saying your untouchable And i cant help feeling invisible I'd give anything to catch your eye So you could see me in a different light Tell me whats it gonna take 'cause i wish you would notice me If you'd only give me just one chance I could be the one, here i am What's it gonna take to understand, wish you would notice me Notice, notice, notice me Notice, notice, notice me You've got a light that never seems to fade, I'm drawn to you and i can't look away We come from different places, girl i know (oww) But when two world collide it could be beautiful I'd give anything to catch your eye So you could see me in a different light Tell me whats it gonna take 'cause i wish you would notice me If you'd only give me just one chance I could be the one, oh here i am What's it gonna take to understand, wish you would notice me Notice, notice, notice me Notice, notice, notice me I wonder if you know how amazing you are, You leave me breathless You didn't even try but you've stolen my heart And i don't want it back, i don't want it back I'd give anything to catch your eye So you could see me in a different light Tell me whats it gonna take 'cause i wish you would notice me If you'd only give me just one chance I could be the one, oh here i am What's it gonna take to understand, wish you would notice me Notice, notice, notice me Notice, notice, notice me!" As the music stopped everyone stood up and cheered. Some boys whistled which made some girls to shout rude names at me like Slut,Bitch,and tone-deaf wanna be. But those names don't hurt me my 'friends' called me worse things before. Well technically they stopped being my friends after Liam left. Anyway, i looked though the crowd and guess who i saw? Are you not going to guess..........fine be a party pooper. It was my brother and his friends YAY............NOT! i walked off stage an Liam stepped closer and i just walked past him giving him an evil glare. I heard him sigh as i walked past . His friends just stood there so, i just pushed past them until one of his friends grabbed me by the arm and dragged me outside. When we got outside i finally noticed who it was. He had messy brown hair and really pretty crystal blue eyes. He looked hot really. "Okay what is wrong with you? Why do you hate Liam?" he asked. "I don't hate him but if he was on fire and i had water, I would drink it." I replied with a smirk. "So you hate him." "WHY THE FUCK DO YOU CARE I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU!!" I yelled at him. " I care because whether you care or not you are hurting Liam with this attitude of yours. And my name is Louis William Tomlinson,so now you know me." "Well listen here Louis i don't care if i hurt him he hurt me now its my turn." i said before walking off to get in my car. As i was driving I started to really think about what Louis said. Did I really hurt him that bad that his friends want to fix things. I never really thought that he cared about me or that his little sister meant so much to him. I focused back on the road to realize that i didn't know where i was going, I took a sharp left turn and saw bright headlights. I screamed and put my arms in front of my chest and head. The cars collided and my window shield shattered into 100s of little pieces. All I could see was lots of grey smoke and blood lots of it and it was my blood. i could hear the people around the crash screaming and some crying. I reached over to grab my phone when i noticed the HUGE piece of glass stuck in my arm. The sight of such a gruesome thing mad me dizzy. That's when i heard it. "Marie,Marie, OH MY GOD,MARIE!!" It was the sound of my brothers voice that brought tears to my eyes. l looked up just to catch a glimpse of Liam running towards the crash with tears in his eyes and his friends right behind him before everything went black........
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