The Worst Fanfiction Ever Written

So I decided to write this as a joke, I've read a lot of fanfiction with some of these 'mistakes' like really odd phrasing and/or really bad story lines.
So... sit back, relax and marvel over this fanfiction and hopefully you will have couple of laughs along the way.
Cringe worthy moments take up 99% of this book..


4. Starbucks

Daisy's P.O.V.


I walked through the door to Starbucks and it dinged as I entered. I popped on over to the counter and ordered a latte.

"Name?" The cashier asked.

I said my name then went to wait in line with all the other people waiting for coffee. I pulled out my phone and started scrolling through twitter. There was all this stuff about some boy band called One Direction being in town... Hmmm I've never heard of them. I wonder who they are.

"Daisy." The person said and I walked over and took my latte.

As I turned around I collided with someone and my latte went all down the front of his shirt. 

"Oh my gosh I'm so sorry!" I gushed to the person as I looked up into his orbs, he looked so familiar but I couldn't quite put my finger on where I'd seen him before.

"No worries love, it's only scalding hot coffee dripping down my shirt and burning me I'm fine." He assured me and he flashed a toothless smile.

"Is there anything I can do to fix this?" I asked him.

"Yes... I think I... Love you. I mean we only just met and you ruined my shirt and I probably have third degree burns from your coffee but I love you." He said staring into my orbs.

"What?" I asked.


"But yo-" 

"I said it's nothing!" He yelled at me causing some people to turn and look at us.

Then I ran out of Starbucks and as far away from him as possible. *shocker*

"Wait!" I heard him calling me but I didn't stop until I was well away from him and his hurtful words.  You see, I don't take people yelling at me very well. I was bullied in high school and I had and still have no friends.

I didn't know where to go, OBVIOUSLY I couldn't go home because that's what happens in this world. So instead I went to my friend Annie's house. We've been best friends since third grade.

I knocked on her door.

"Daisy! What's the matter?" She asked pulling me into her house. I sat down on the couch and told her what happened. Everything that happened. After she let me cry for a while I walked into her kitchen to get some water. I drank some water. I picked up a spoon and looked at my reflection in it. I dropped the spoon. This was the worst day of my life! I spilled coffee on some stranger and NOW I've gone and done it. I dropped a spoon. Better have another cry about it!

I decided I was too emotionally drained to go back to my house for the night so I stayed at Annie's. Hopefully tomorrow will be better....


*Helloooooo lovely people! Thanks for the comments and thank you to Louis'AbsTho;) for the suggestion! So I wrote this chapter in a bit of a hurry but what do you think? 

So fun writing this! Loving it haha!! Anyways be sure to comment more suggestions and if you want to read a proper fanfic... At least I think it's proper... Go check out my other one called The Promise. It's a Louis fanfic :) Rightio enough of my mind numbing authors notes 

Ciao for now!

Stay alive.

xoxox Secretive*



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