Marry You

Ashley and Zack has been together for 2 years but they haven't kissed yet! Ashley feels that without this, they won't be a real couple, and her friends agrees. But Zack who's obsessed with his band doesn't really notice what Ashley wants.

(This is my first movella, and I would love to get feedback. I know that there may be grammatic errors, so please tell me if you find any! Most of all thank you if you'll take your time to read this little story)

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Burying my head in my pillow i cried all night. I forgot about my noisy stomach, and slept with my clothes, make-up and shoes on.

I blushed, handing the box to him. His eyes widened when he saw what was in the box. "Valentine chocolate for me? Thanks Ashley!" then he made one of those cute laughs and his usual smile widened even more. "Umm.. y-you have to put them together.. like a puzzle.." His eyes shone like they had never shone before. I knew how much he loved games. "Oh! Of course! That's so cool, thanks again Ashley!" Then he began puzzling with them, making different words. YOU, OLIVE, LIE, YOLO.. he wasn't even close. I bent over the table he sat at, and started doing the puzzle for him. I LOVE YOU. ... We went silent for a bit. Then he looked at me, serious, shocked. "Please.. go out with me?" I asked, breaking the silence.. "Yes..! I mean.. okay!" He blushed, then made a massive smile. Then he hugged me, holding me in his wide arms.. I felt like I could stay there forever...

 

 

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