Marry You

Ashley and Zack has been together for 2 years but they haven't kissed yet! Ashley feels that without this, they won't be a real couple, and her friends agrees. But Zack who's obsessed with his band doesn't really notice what Ashley wants.

(This is my first movella, and I would love to get feedback. I know that there may be grammatic errors, so please tell me if you find any! Most of all thank you if you'll take your time to read this little story)

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"Oh em geeh! Ashley! You need to pull yourself together!"

"Yeah! I mean, if you don't do something about this you'll end up being a loner that hasn't had their first kiss!"

Selena and Jessie looks worried at me.

"And you're 18 already!" Selena exclaims.

Selena and Jessie has been my best friends since 5th grade and still is. We've been through hard times together and helped each other when we needed it.

"Guys! You're being too loud! And are you done yet? I have customers to serve!"

I'm working at a coffee shop that my uncle owns, and it's quite well known in my town. There's only half an hour till Zack is practicing with his mates. Customers standing in the line glares at my two friends. I give them an excusing smile and attempts to make Selena and Jessie go away. My friends giggles, then they takes a seat by the window. I look at my wristwatch. 16:45, 15 min. left...

 

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