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10. One Girl's Dream by Prez Chipher

Review by Cambie Everdeen.

 

One Girl's Dream by Prez Chipher

 

 

Prez, I absolutely love it so far. My opinion is you should probably describe your character, Twyla. I can only see the cuts and self harm she has done to herself. I would describe her more. Also, love the Doctor Who and Gravity Falls crossover, plus your own touch. Original and makes this story stand out. Love it! 

 

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