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2. I chose him from the start by: croconiall doneme

I just finished reading I chose him from the start and overall I really liked it. One thing I noticed was that in the beginning you never really used punctuation but in the 6th or 7th chapter you started using it. Also you really don't update that often and when you do that readers lose interest, or forget what the story is about. But one thing I really liked was all of the detail you put into the story, also how you don't put said after every time someone talks! I think this story is great so on a scale of 1-10 I give this story a 9.5, it was really good!

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