Dumbledore's Apprentice The First Year (COMPLETE)

Alisha Moonglow is a 12 year old girl, tortured by some cruel force of nature, but when Albus Dumbledore rescues her from the lips of a Dementor she learns she has gifts, gifts that will open doors she never knew were closed, gifts that will earn her a place in Hogwart School Of Witchcraft and Wizardry. This will be updated every Monday.

This is finito but I will be posting sneak peeks, diary entries, quizzes and fun stuff like that!


10. The Bed Next Door

Alisha got up one morning and started to get dressed for another day at Hogwarts. Except she then realised it was a Saturday, so changed into a t-shirt with her name on it, some baggy tracksuit bottoms and a pair of rainbow coloured DocMartens. She ran/cartwheeled to the Breakfast Hall and began to munch on her waffles. A whole day of possible fun stretched out in front of her. As much as Alisha enjoyed being taught at Hogwarts, she adored Saturdays. They were the one day in the week when you could wake up late and go to bed late. On Weekdays, you had to get up early for school and go to bed early to get a good start for the next day and on Sundays you were tired from Saturday night and had to be ready for Monday morning. So Saturdays were EPIC!!!!! Alisha stood up and went to do something fun. As she went to find her friend, Draco Malfoy, she bumped into someone reading a book in the corner.

"Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry!" Alisha exclaimed as the girl's book fell from her hands. Alisha thought it was like looking in a mirror. The girl looked jut like her.

"Its alright." Replied the girl squinting in the sunlight. Alisha picked up the book and thousands of little pieces of paper fell out. Tons of beautiful, beautiful drawings and amazing pieces of writing scribbled in a neat hand lay scattered all over the floor. The girl quickly began to gather them and Alisha thought she should help.

" These drawings are amazing!"

"No they're really nothing!" The girl replied.

"Oooh, and this writing! 'And when the fireworks glow bright the stars have fallen from the sky.' Wow,  this stuff is epic!" By this point everyone one was staring at the two girls, for Alisha had been shouting at the top of her lungs,

"Alisha please it's nothing!" She said tears pricking her eyes. 

"Oh, sorry. How do you know my name?"

"I sleep in the bed next to you. Amaris, Amaris Ava, by the way." 

"Well, can we be friends Amaris?"

"Best friends, if you like." Replied Amaris hopefully.

"Really? Then I must introduce you to my other best friend, Herma- Hemio- I can't say her name."

"There's an easy way of learning. Her." Said Amaris pointing at Alisha.

"Her." Replied Alisha pointing at Amaris."

"My." Said Amaris pointing to herself.

"My." Alisha repeated.

"Oh." Said Amaris putting a hand to her mouth.

"Oh." Said Alisha, gasping. Amaris giggled.

"Knee." Said Amaris pointing to her knee.

"Knee." Alisha copied. "I have to go show my other best friend this!" So they ran off to meet Hermione. She was studying quietly in the library.

"Amaris this is my bestest friend in the whole wide world, Her. My. Oh. Knee. Her. My. Oh. Knee. this is my bestest friend in the whole wide world, Amaris. The three girls chatted for a bit, then heard the lunch bell and went to go get some food.

"Who's that with Fred?" Hermione asked Ron.

"Oh that's his new girlfriend Bailey Nichol."

"I thought he was dating Mia Broadhurst from Ravenclaw."

"Nah, they broke up."

"Whose that?"


"With Malfoy." The question had been intended for Harry, but Alisha answered. 

"Oh that's Emma Wenlock, she fancies him, she's not very nice." The conversation continued until a girl sat down next to them with a loud thump.

"You have got to help me, sorry Lara Dolittle second year," Said the girl stretching out her hand for Alisha to shake. Alisha shook it gingerly. "As I was saying, you've got to help me, your friend Draco Malfoy is being an absolute pig to my friend Scarlett Starlette. She's so sad her hair's turning blue, she's a Metamorphmagus. Could you sort it out?" 

"Ok." So Alisha stood up and begun walking towards the Slytherin table. 

"But Alisha, I thought you said you'd help me with my Herbology homework!"

"Oh um, Mindy Perkins, I did."

"Weren't you going to do my seeker practice with me." Said a jealous looking Mia Broadhurst. 

"Oh, yes."

"Alisha, not to be rude, but you promised you'd make sure my beauty potion worked." Said a very beautiful Bailey Nichol.

"Can we have that game of footie now Alisha?" Said Danni Sands, standing up from the Ravenclaw table.

"Look, Scarlett is really upset, could you please sort it out?" Beseeched Lara.

"STOP, STOP, STOP!" Shouted Alisha, the whole hall went quiet. "Draco stop being such a pig! Neville help Mindy with her homework. Harry help Mia with her seeker practice. Her. My. Oh. Knee, go and sort out Bailey's potion. Dean, go and play football with Danni and I'll go comfort Scarlett. Happy? Amaris can you come with me, from what Lara says, it might be a little hard." Everyone did as instructed, which the teachers began to comment on.


"Well Albus, it seems your plan is working, she's obviously got the leadership about her." Said a not so stern-faced Professor McGonagall.

"Indeed, as she gets older, I think it will seem that Alisha will be my perfect apprentice."

DUN! DUN! DUN!                 


Hi peeps lunallamabrian here (who else would it be?), i just felt like doing the dun dun dun thing, ok in case you are a little confused, here is an explanation.


My friend picked NettleSilver23195 as the winner with her amazing character Amaris Ava, but all the characters were so good I thought I'd include all of them as chorus singers, if you like, and have Amaris as the lead singer. That make sense? So all the characters will be in the story but only vaguely and don't worry if you missed out or are not NettleSilver23195, there'll be other competitions later on in the books! Probably not in this one because it's nearly over. Here is a list of characters and creators so you can applaud them for their amazing work.


AMARIS AVA - NettleSilver23195 (sorry we changed her a bit, do you mind if she's in Gryffindor?)


LARA DOLITTLE - EmilyPotter123


BAILEY NICHOL - StarSnitch23577



DANNI SANDS - ReadxWrite

These are not in order (apart from the top one), my friend just picked a winner NOT a second, third, fourth, etc, etc. Thank you for entering and I hope you have/had (whichever) a lovely Bonfire Night!






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