My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


4. The pool

A/N: Before I start this chapter I would love to say thanks to I_love_1D_21_6 and 1D are awesome for commenting and being there from the start. I know that this is only the 4th chapter but literally about 2 hours after I uploaded the first chapter they read it and commented! Comments just make my day and I will always try to reply to ALL of my readers! So that is why I am dedicating this chapter to- I_love_1D_21_6 and 1D are awesome!



I walked up the stairs and just as I was about to open the door a sign caught my eye, it read,


Noooooo, I thought to myself, I don't get the pool all to myself! 

Ah well, at least it's only one other person. I didn't even notice the other notice that read,

POOL RESERVED FOR ROOM 902 from 3:30-6:00


Instead I just opened the door. Before me sat, 5 VERY good looking boys. Then I realised they were all staring at me.

"Ummmmmm hi?" I said, making it sound like a question.

"Hey, what are you doing here?" A boy with curly hair asked.

"Well I'm in the presidential suite, so I thought I would come for a swim!" I replied

"yeah but we rented this place out!" A boy with stripy shorts on said.

"Oh then I guess I'll leave then" I said turning around to go, well that was embarrassing, I thought!

"wait, you seem likefun, you can stay here with us!" A blonde haired boy said. He had an Irish accent.

"Yeah stay" they all said

" Um ok" I said, "my name is Louise"

"I am Niall"

"I am Harry"

"I am louis"

"i am Zayn"

"and I am Liam"

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