My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


9. The park

RI woke up and had a shower. After I dried myself I wrapped a towel around myself and went to look for my clothes- I still hadn't unpacked yet! I finally found them in my blue and pink spotty suitcase. I wore my denim shorts and a crop top with Loveheart sweets all over it. I then put on my light pink Converse and I decided not to where jewellery. I did natural makeup and left my hair natural. I popped my sunglasses on my head before grabbing my bag, throwing my keys, a water bottle and some money in and walked out of the door. At that moment I got a text.


R u ready?


yeh c u outside :)

I walked to the lift and when I got down to the. Lobby I walked outside. I saw Liam and walked over to him, "Hi" I said cheerily.

"Hi, I thought we should go to the park, it's only a five minute walk away" He said

"Yeah sure" I replied

We walked to the park and when we got to the park we sat down on a blanket and had a picnic. It was really fun until a load of people with cameras came and started taking pictures yelling, "LIAM, LIAM, OVER HERE! IS SHE YOUR GIRLFRIEND? WHO IS SHE?"

Me and Liam ran back to the apartment as fast as we could and when we got to my room, he said, "sorry about that,"

" it's ok but how did those people know your name, and why did they want pictures?" I replied

"it's because I am the most amazing person EVER!"he sSaudi brushed it off, thinking that I would find out soon. I walked into my apartment and started unpacking.

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