My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


7. The game

We all sat in a circle. 

"Ok, so I'll go first. Louise, how old are you?" Niall asked.

"I am 19," I replied.

"Ok so, are you rich?" Liam asked.

"No, well my mam was pretty wealthy and she left her credit card behind when she left and my dad, well I don't like to talk about him."

"Right, do you have any siblings?" Zayn asked.

"Well..." here was the awkward one, might as well tell the truth, "well I have a brother thats 20 and his dad took him away when I was younger. Thats why I am here actually, I came to find my brother, I know he lives in London and his name is Liam... just like you Liam haha"

Liams face paled,"emmmmm.....What is your surname?"

"Hey, it's MY turn not yours!" Louis yelled

"Shut up, Louis, this is important," Liam said

"Oooooooooooookkkkkkkkkkk," Louis said.

"My surname is Payne," I said, thinking nothing was wrong.

"That's so cool, if Liam had a little sister called Louise it would be so cool!" Niall said

"What?" I asked.

"Liam's surname is Payne." I Niall replied.

I almost died, my brother is called Liam Payne.

At the exact same moment, Liam and I  blurted out, "I think your my sister," and

"I think your my brother!"

The 4 boys gasped.


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