My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


23. Surprise!

A/N: So sorry I haven't updated in like a month but I have been do busy, with studying, homework, and tests! To top all of that, my mam thinks I am addicted to my iPod so I have to be really careful to only go on my iPod to update when she is not around cuz I don't want her to take my iPod away because Christmas is coming up and updating this story as much as I can Is my Christmas present to you!

PS: all of that studying payed off cuz I got 98% in a maths test! YAY!


I opened to hear all of the boys acreing at Iz's phone - wait why didn't she have her phone. I looked at Louis and he was screaming, "NOOOOOOO YOU CAN'T JUST DO THAT!"

Iz grabbed her phone off him and looked at it, then, all of a sudden, she screamed, "WHY DO YOU HAVE MY PHONE AND EHY ATE YOU READING ELLIE'S STORY? WAIT, MY PHONE HAS A LOCKCODE! ONLY LOUISE KNOWS IT!"

"We' left your phone here and we decided to check out the story that you were freaking out over and it is amazing! Oh and you need a better password, LOUISTOMLINSON is not the best password ever!" Liam replied.

Iz started turning a bright shade of pink and she just sat their quietly.

"I can't believe you hit her, Harry, I just can't believe it!" Louis said to Harry, shaking his head. (Anyone who has read smithep200's book, Adopted will get what Louis said! If you haven't read it, go now! She just recently completed it and it is AMAZING!)

we were all collapsed on the floor laughing. While Louis was hitting Harry. 

"Hey...No hitting Styles!" I exclaimed.

Niall came over to me and took my hand, he started whispering to me, "wanna go on a date tonight?"

"Sure," I replied.

"DATE? DATE! We gotta go!" Liz exclaimed while dragging me into my room with the other girls following. Ellie even came too.

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