My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


5. Having fun

A/N: I would just like to thank everybody for commenting and I would like to tell you to read I_love_1D_21_6's fanfic called the one direction story it's really good and she is a really good friend of mine!

I got to know a bit about he boys, I finally know who is who.

Harry is the one with curly hair.

zayn is the mysterious one.

Louis is the one with stripy shorts on.

Liam is the mature one.

and lastly, Niall is the beautiful blonde Irishman!


At the moment I am sitting on the sunbed after drying off, having a lovely day in the pool.

Suddenly, I heard footsteps, I looked up Louis was walking towards me,

"You wouldn't'l I said.

"Oh I would," he replied "AAAAAH!" He came running towards me, pulling me up And running to the edge of the pool about to throw me in, then he burst out laughing,

"Oh, Louise I wouldn't do anything to you!" 

"Oh my god thank you Lo-" I didn't get to finish my sentence because Louise threw me in the pool.

I sank to the bottom of the pool and I had a dumb moment, I scrambled around trying to breath until I suddenly remembered that I can swim, I quickly swam up to the surface and gasped for air.


"Oh my god, Louise, are you ok?" Harry asked.

"yeah," I said looking around" em... Where's Niall?"

"Oh, he thought you were drowning so he-" Louis started to explain when Niall came up gasping for air,

"Niall, did you dive in the water, to save me?" I asked

"em....." Nails face was like a tomato, "yes?" He said making it sound like s question

my eyes started to water,

"are you ok, Louise, is anything wrong?" Niall asked

", that's just the sweetest thing anyone has ever done for me!" I replied

" we'll, someone as beautiful as you deserved something as sweet as that" he said

we heard a chorus if 'aaaaaahs'

we both turned our heads and glared at the 4 boys staring intently at us.

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