My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


15. Amazing

A/N: OMG I am SOSOSO sorry I didn't update in ages it's just I was very busy! OK so this chapter is dedicated to Niallers_princess21, Sophie Brookes and Alex.Browning they have amazing stories and they are. Just really cool. The winner to my first contest is...DUN DUN DUUUN...Smithep200 - I am 12 years old! :P she will make a short appearance in my fanfic. The winners to my other contest are Alex.Browning and Smithep200 :) They will get to be in my fanfic! Bye!

PS: Who saw Story Of My Life? What do you think of it?



i got out of the shower and put my dressing gown on. I brushed my hair, dried it and brushed and flossed my teeth. The girls were doing me up, KiKi was picking out my outfit, MoMo was picking out accesories, Iz was doing my hair, and Liz was doing my make up (I told her to only put on a little.)


I got out of the bathroom and sat down on front of the mirror. Iz and Liz got started. They put a sheet over the mirror so I couldn't see myself. KiKi and MoMo handed me a cream, above the knee, dress with lace at the top and a black collar. They also handed me black dolly shoes, a black bracelet, black, heart shaped earrings and a black, heart shaped bag. They decided no necklace. 


I got dressed and came out, they all stopped what thye were doing and stared open mouthed at me.

"You might want to close your mouths!" I joked. Straightaway they closed their mouths, Liz went 

Over and ripped the sheet off of the mirror I have to say I looked amazing! The clothes and accessories were amazing and my makeup was light but with some glitter on the eyes. My hair was definitely amazing though. It was up in a donut at the back but there was a few strands of hair loose at the front which were curled it was perfect. 


I had left my nails the way they were, silver with black dots, there was a now on the thumb and ring finger! The four girls walked out of the room ahead of me and I could here all of the boys turning around in their seats and asking we're I was. I took that as my cue to come out of the room. The girls looked proud of what they had done, the boys looked gobsmacked especially Liam and Niall. All of a sudden Liam smiled and looked proud. Niall walked over to me and laced his fingers with mine. We were walking out of the door when Liam shouted after us, "Have her back by 12:00," 

I rolled my eyes - big brother way taking over. Niall whispered on my ear, "you look beautiful,"

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