My Big Brother

Hi, my name is Louise. I am 19 years old and I have a 20 year old brother that I don't know anything about! My mam abandoned me a month ago and my dad, well, I don't know anything about him. I was a mistake, no one wanted me, no one wants me, but, will someone want me?

I need to find my brother he is the only one left, the only one who can help me forget my past and think about the future. But will I ever find him?

A story filled with hurt, anger and sadness. A story that will not only make you laugh but cry. A story filled with pain a suffering but will Louise ever find her big brother and her one true love?


1. The journey

I sat down, this was gonna be a looooong ride. I tried to get comfortable - it wasn't easy!

I was going to London on the bus from Wolverhampton  to find my long lost big brother I only know his name and that he lives in London. He is 20 years old - one year older than me. He left when I was 6 and he was 7. His dad took him away and now, I am going to find him.



I looked at the picture, I was only 8. There was a girl that looked like me when I was about 4 but there was a boy there as well. " Mammy!" I said.

"Yes honey?" She asked, she was in a cheery mood today.

"Who is that boy in the picture?" I asked

Suddenly her whole mood changed, she grabbed the picture and ripped it in two. She then threw the pieces at me. " There you worthless piece of junk" she screamed at me.

I started to cry and that just made her even angrier.


* End of flashback*


I hadn't even noticed I was crying until an old lady behind me handed me a tissue and said " there you go, now wipe those beautiful eyes of yours"

I smiled and did what she told me to do. I then thanked her, " thank you very much...."

"Mabel,"she replied "and no problem."

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