When September ends.....

What would you do one day if you woke up to see that the love of your life has just win the x-factor and is now in a world famous boyband ? well this is what happened to Montana whe n Louis left one day and no one told her. Not even Louis.


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Niall P.O.V.

I left I couldn't take it anymore. It can't take her she will get through this. I keep telling myself those words over and over again because it's true right? I just couldn't imagine her dying and me not even being there but she's not going to die! I kept kicking myself for not being there every time she has to go the hospital I'm so stupid! I got a text from Louis and it said

'Hey where are you Jess is crying because u left get home quick!'

'K I'll be there soon.'

I stuffed my phone back in my pocket ignoring it going off because people kept texting me and calling me. I started to walk home just trying to clear my head. When an idea popped into my head. That's it. I have something big planned.

Louis P.O.V.

I just got a text from Niall him seeming very excited.

'Big plan I'll text you the hints for Jess later gtg! :)'

"Umm ok then" I said while chuckling.

I decided to distract Jess awhile but I kept thinking about her leaving. Except this time it was the other way around. She left. Will she ever come back I'm not sure but there is no way in hell that I'm going to let her go again.

"Hey Jess come here let's go for a walk yeah?"

"Ok!" She chirped.

I helped put her coat on her and put my jean jacket on and we started walking. We've been walking for about thirty minutes and that's when my phone vibrated.

'First clue.. Go to mcdonalds and order a parfait ;)'

"Hey Jess so Niall has a treasure hunt for you here's the first clue."

I held the phone up so she could see and she took off running. I finally caught up to her and she already had the clue. Holy crap she runs fast.

Jess P.O.V.

The last clue was in my hands.. This is it. It read "Jess so you found the last clue walk to the park tell Louis to stay. Come to the bench I'll be waiting. Nialler <3"

"Louis stay here."


"Niall said you have to stay here or go home."

"I'll go home see ya then queen."

"See ya."

He walked away and I started running to the park. I went straight to our bench and Niall was standing there.

"Niall!" I yelled running over to him and jumping into his arms.

"I though you were mad at me you left and I...I." I sobbed into his shoulder.

"No I'd never be mad at you I was upset but I have wow thing to do."


He put me down and smiled at me. He pecked my lips and stood still. He looked really nervous.

"Jessica I love you and I want to prove it to you.. I haven't been there for your hospital appointments and I feel terrible but I promise form now on I'll try my best to be there."

He got down on one knee and smiled. My hand came over to my mouth as he pulled out a ring. I started to cry.

"Jessica I love you and I'm going to prove it." He repeated.

"So I'm asking you with all my heart and soul....... Will you Jessica marry me?"

I shook my head yes. "Yes Niall I will marry you." I cried.

He slipped the ring onto my finger and he picked me up and kissed me passionately. I was going to be with this man for the rest of my life and I'm thankful for that. 

This is amazing and was written by my best friend Montana Tomlinson (:

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