Hate What You've Become

(Based on a true story :) . )

Lana And Dane had been together for almost nine months.
She was happy and so was he.

Lana's friends were happy for her, glad she'd finally found someone who loved and cared for her...well thats what they think.

Lana and Dane have a bitter fallout and her and her friends want revenge...but not in a gruesome way...

Dane always put Lana down and tried to rip her dreams away from her, he hates to be proved wrong, so that's exactly what they'll do.

But will there be a happy ending for Lana?

Or will Dane succeed in breaking her down and making her give up??

Read On To Find Out!


4. Chapter 4

Chapter 4:

Step 1:


Adel, Lana, Tom, blake, Jason, Lee and Jayden were back at the park.

Everyone they needed were still there. 'Right, lets not waste time, split up and tell everyone you can find. except for that old couple over there, obviously...they'll think your crazy.' said Adel.

'Whoa...hold up, i missed all the planning.' said tom

'Thats because you took the piss in the shop.' said Adel, 'Right just stick with Lana and agree with everything she says. you'll soon get it.'

'Right ok. Lana wait up!' shouted tom running over to Lana.

'Hey, Karl...you know Dane right?' said lana.

'Yeah known him about 2 years why?'

'Has he ever bitched about Adel because she's german. Someone told me he's a racist and think he bitched about her.' said Lana.

'Umm, i know he has bitched about her but I havent heard him be racist. is he a racist?' Karl asked.

'Yeah, and he takes the piss out of disabled people. You know that guy in the wheelchair who has no legs?' ...Karl nodded... 'Well he laughed at him. and he didnt help him when he fell out his wheelchair.'

'A red wheelchair?' asked Karl.

'Yeah why?'

'Thats Jocelynn's Granddad.' said karl. 'Bandages on the umm, there's no nice way to say it but the stumps he has left of his legs? Kinda bald wears glasses?'

'yeah thats the guy.' said Lana.

'Hold up i'll just go tell Jocelynn.' said Karl, he turned around and walked off towards where Jocelynn was standing talking to Adel.

'Hey Joce...' said karl but was interrupted by Adel.

'Dont bother talking to her, i just kinda told her Dane's bitched about her disabled granddad...she's not happy.' Adel turned back to Jocelynn 'I didnt have a clue it was your Granddad chick, i'm sorry.'

'Lana's just told me that.' said Karl

'It's ok, just tell me where that dirty creep lives...I'll KILL HIM!!' Jocelynn shouted.

Lana came over. 'You told her before Karl did huh?'

Adel nodded as she was hugging a crying Jocelynn.

'Why would someone laugh at a old disabled man? that just plain cruel.' said Jocelynn.

'I know it is hun. You wanna help us ruin his life?' asked adel.

'No, its ok, i'll do it by myself.' said jocelynn. 'Thanks for letting me know though Adel. And good luck ruining his life!' she said.

Jocelynn walked away with her friend Tempany.

They were talking about what Dane had said about her granddad.

'Well thats 2 turned against him. JAY?' adel shouted.

Jayden came running over after finishing a conversation with a guy called Connor. 'Yeah?'

'How many you got?'

'I've managed to turn 3 against him including his best friend Connor. That guy i was just talking to.' said Jayden.

'Apparently, Dane's been starting to annoy a lot of people recently, including jesse's girlfriend. she said he's always around there playing on their Xbox and eating their food, Bitching about people and telling them how to run their house and stuff. basically she said that he's trying to play Dad.' said Connor as he walked over.

'I need some caramel shortcake now.' said Jayden.

'good job a brought some then.' said Adel, handing Jayden a slice of caramel shortcake. 'Anyway Connor, carry on.'

'Right well i was at Jesse's once and i noticed it. He was bitching about a girl called Lana, i dont know who she is, i dont think i've ever met a 'Lana' but he was bitching about hersaying she's stupid and she's living off childish hopes and dreams that will get her nowhere, i'm not sure what he meant by that but i didnt want to ask because i dont wanna get involved in his petty backstabbing. do you guys know who she is?' said Cnor.

'Yeah, that girl who was standing next to me when you walked over, that's lana, My best friend and tom's sister. she's over there now talking to Lauren and Kyle.' said Adel.

'Oh is that her? I thought she was kinda hot! haha! i'm kinda new to this group so i dont really know anyone apart from Dane, Jesse, Amy and Karl.' said Connor. 'So what are the 'childish dreams?'

'The only thing i can think of is the fact she wants to be a singer...she's a great singer...she's in a band with tom, me, blake and our friend Rocky. We all live together now so its much easier for us to practice and get it perfect. I was talking to the guy who owns that little rock club in the next estate from here, he said he might be able to get us a gig.' said Jayden.

'Oh, congratulations. Hope it all goes well. but why would he bitch about her, how does he know her?' said Connor

'Well she's his ex. They broke up last night which leads me to the question, when was he bitching about her?' asked Adel.

'I think it was about 2 weeks ago.' said connor.

'That 2-faced bastard.' said Adel.

Adel shouted lana over, as she was coming over she looked pretty happy with herself. 'Well i managed to find out some info...

Dane used to be a little agressive to his ex leanne. pushed her about and had his hands round her throat at some point!'

'Well i've found out Dane was bitching about you to Jesse and Amy once about 2 weeks ago...when you two were still together.' said Adel.

'Oh really? well looks like we have more ammo now!' said Lana.

'Your not bothered?' asked connor.

'No...because what he doesn't know is that everything is about to come back and bite him on the balls.' said Lana.

'True...' said connor.

'Why would he tell someone he finds it cool to laugh at disabled people? What the hell is wrong with him?' Said Tom.

Their plan was working.

Dane's friends were beginning to find out what he was really like.

Some people wanted to see for themselves instead of going off what other people have said but some had already noticed it but hadn't thought much of it until now.

Soon Dane would be losing all of his friends and he'll be left with Maya...who will soon find out she can do way much better than him.

Lana, Adel, Tom, Blake, Jayden, Lee, Jason and even Rox spent a week on Step 1.

Connor helped out a little too.  Everything was going smoothly.

Tomorrow they start on Step 2.

But...before that, Lana and Adel went round to see Jesse and Amy.




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