Movella Reviews

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17. How much I loathe you-Dem1

Let me just put this out there- if you are having a bad day, want to punch someone or feel like you haven't smiled in half a century then I seriously recommend reading this Movella! I was practically crying by the end of it out of laughter, not only because I could relate to it but the writing was so just witty and smart! 

Firstly, I loved how it started. "Worst. Day. Ever." I adore when authors do this by making each word feel like its punching you in the gut. It certainly gave me an automatic feel for the main character Penelope and I could see her clearly with tensed up shoulders, red face, wild hair and clenched fists just from this line. It was a great start to the chapter as well because it was very engaging and certainly made me want to read on.

Secondly, I love how each chapter is named 'I loathe you because...' I thought this was very clever and effective and it also looked really good when you clicked on the little button and just saw all of this reasons as to why Penelope loathed that one person. Furthermore, I think that all the readers could certainly make a connection with the character which is really good because as much as we don't like to admit it, we, or at least I, occasionally go into blind fits of rage whether its over a person or thing. 

Also, it was just little things that Dem1 did throughout the story that really made me smile like when she was describing the tiny apartment that they just moved into and she put the word 'tiny' in a small font. Its just little things like that that authors do that really add to their stories.

Finally, I have to say that my favorite chapter over all was 'I loathe you because you're mr. Cocky.' The banter in it wad hilarious and I thought all the comments made were comical and shrewd.

I throughly enjoyed reading this and I can't wait for and update!

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