Movella Reviews

Hello everybody! This is a completely unoriginal idea but here I am, starting a movella review report. I can't review anything marked as red (not old enough) but I can read over anything marked green or yellow. I would prefer not to have fan-fics about 1D or Justin Bieber, but if it absolutely desperate, I would be more than happy to review it. Just leave the name of your book in the comments below and I will review them ASAP. :)

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2. Gwen: A One Direction Fan-Fiction

First of all, I would just like to say well done to Prez! Your story plot was great, you had perfect structure and no grammatical issues and you kept me very engaged the whole story!

Usually I don't read fan-fics but I have to admit that this one was lovely! I liked how Prez made the main character younger which is a nice change to the usual 16 or 17 aged characters. One of my favorite character personality's was probably Erica's. I loved how she looked all mean and gossipy (is that a word?) on top but in actually fact, she was something much, much more and there was obviously a lot of depth to her. In fact, I loved all of the character's and I think that Prez has a real talent for creating original personas! One of the bits in the story that made me smile was the narration about how 'angry birds was never played anymore.' I thought it was very realistic how you made such a popular game now seem silly and boring to play in the future. 

Furthermore, I liked how at the end *SPOILER ALERT* Erica offered Gwen to edit her article and I loved how the two of them became really close after Gwen read it, I thought this was a very touching moment. Finally, I loved the end quote in the book "Maybe life isn't so bad after all." It was set out perfectly and clearly and made for a very emotional ending!

I highly recommend reading this short but engaging novella. Great Work, Prez!

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