Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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  • Published: 4 Oct 2013
  • Updated: 13 Nov 2014
  • Status: Complete
When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+


6. Chapter 5: Darkness

Sorry for the short chapter everyone. Just the first POV'S of Makaela and Zayn.




John called the school telling them I wouldn't be attending for a week because of family issues. John and Hilda tried talking to me but every time they ask, I would only say a few sentences, nothing more. Zayn visited me countless time. He and I get along very well, really good friends. That one time he held my hand, I felt somewhat special and although I didn't show it, I did blush in secret when he held my hand. For once, I was happy. No fighting, no yelling, nothing. Zayn is an amazing friend but my heart is telling me Zayn and I are something more. Liam also visited every once in a while, but when he does I don't answer and neither does John.


John and Hilda tried cheering me up with Zayn for a small party night of video games, pizza and a movie. I must say I did have a great time; where I didn't cry but laugh, something John hasn't seen for a very long time. John likes Zayn; he likes him because Zayn treats me good and is happy that I have someone who cares for me just as much as he does. One night when John and Hilda went to bed early and the movie was still going, I felt butterflies in my stomach. Zayn and I, we were alone. Zayn saw Liam peering near the window, watching us, but more importantly, Zayn.


Zayn pulled me close to him and his arm around me, my head on his shoulder. I smiled. I felt safe. He picked me up and sat me down on his lap and I laughed. Zayn looked at Makaela. "Makaela, can I ask you a question?" Zayn asked. "Yeah." "I know that we have been friends for a few days and I know it's crazy for me to ask you this but you're the most amazing, beautiful girl I've ever met. You're kind, intelligent, adorable and the girl I never want to let go. What I'm trying to say is..." There was a pause. "Will you be my girlfriend?" "Z-Zayn, yes" she said, smiling. Zayn breathed a sigh of relief and smiled. He leaned forward and then kissed Makaela on the lips. Liam watched what he saw and was furious that Zayn got his girl. He jaw and his fists clenched tight. He was about the knock the front door down when he heard someone's voice. "Do you think Liam just hates me for nothing or did he really lose it?" "I don't know. But, whatever it is it's not the Liam I remember". "I miss the 'old' Liam." "I know you do, we all do. Just hope he finds his way again." Liam relaxed and slid a letter in the letterbox and left.



Makaela is now my girlfriend. I'm so happy that she said yes. I love her with all my heart, she is my everything and I will not let Liam take her away from me. I sensed someone was watching is from afar or near but I just shrugged it off. Makaela fell asleep so I picked her up 'bridal style' and gently laid her down on the bed. Covering her with the sheets, I smiled and kisses her soft, warm lips. Before I got up, a warm hand was placed against mine "Stay with me" Makaela said. I nodded. I took off my shoes, socks, jacket and t-shirt and slid under the sheets next to Makaela. I looked at her one last time. 'She looks so beautiful when she sleeps' I thought. I smiled and gave her a long, passionate kiss on the lips. I pulled her against my chest, her back facing me and held her close as I began to fall asleep.

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