Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+

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30. Chapter 27: Time (Sneak Peak)

Just to clarify, this is just a sneak peak of Chapter 27. There have been a few people being left out of the story but one has a lot of explaining to do and they will appear in this chapter.

- Amee

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(NO ONE'S POV)

 

9 hours to go

 

Only a couple more hours and Makaela's fate will be judged. Liam opened his eyes a bit and saw his beautiful girl peacefully sleeping. He half smiled. He didn't want her to go just yet. He realized he had been a stupid idiot and loved her. He wanted to confess his heavenly love to her when she wakes up. He never let go of her hand again. Since Liam set foot in the hospital a few hours ago, he never left her side and never let go of her hand. His grasp still tangled with hers. Her hand icy cold but her palm nice and warm. He missed his baby girl in his arms. His missed holding her, kissing her, cuddling with her and heavenly scent of vanilla perfume. He always loved her scent, he didn't want to let her go. He wanted to pour everything out to her, all the little things he loves about her.

 

Her body laying on the hospital bed, still and ice cold. Her knuckles were white and her hands were pale; almost like hard stone. Her face was also ice cold. Pale white she was, all he did was look at her. He was mesmerized by her inner beauty, her beautiful soul and her faint beating heart. He saw no flaws in her because his love for her grew and grew as his heart beats every day growing stronger. Liam desperately wants Makaela to wake up. Without her in his life, he's nothing. He would rather take a bullet for her and die for her than for her to take her own. Liam still feels insanely guilty for what he did to her in the past. If none of things he did happened, Makaela wouldn't be where she is today.

 

Liam's hand is still entwined to hers, not letting go. Still sitting on the chair, his hand locked onto hers, he kisses her hand; feeling the coldness as his lips touched her hand. But he didn't care, the only thing he felt was his warm lips onto her hand. He closed his eyes in peace. He smiled at her touch. He didn't care or paid any attention to the things around him, let alone the footsteps coming towards him and the gentle shake of someone's hand on his shoulder. Liam finally sighed giving up and turned to see Niall standing there with a concerned look on his face and holding a large bag of Nando's. Liam lightly chuckled. Niall furrowed his eyebrows. "Nando's, when are you never hungry?" Liam asked. "Uh, this is for you" Niall said giving the bag to Liam.

 

Liam reached for the bag but Niall quickly said "But, there is food for me too!" Liam chuckled and shook his head. Niall took a seat next to Liam and the two began eating, filling their stomachs. For Liam, Nando's was the food to give him that warm feeling just like Makaela gave her love to him. He hadn't eaten for the last few days and did feel nausea and tired at the time. Now, he was eating he now felt better. The smell of food lingered which made his stomach growl, not ignoring the fact that he's hungry and he wasn't going to go on with the feeling of being sick any longer.

 

After they've finished and feeling full, Liam looked at Niall and sighed. "Liam don't worry, she'll make it through mate" Niall said patting his back. Liam's jaw clenched. "Nine hours mate, nine fucking more hours to go and I can't take it any longer" Lian confessed. "I know mate but you have to stay strong for Makaela." "I know it's just, I feel she's hiding something from me and I just can't figure it out. I mean, I'm no mind reader or anything but I always feel this sudden emptiness in the pit of my stomach and the constant bad dreams I've been having lately" Liam explained. "Bad dreams as in nightmares?" Niall asked. Liam nodded. "Do you want to tell me about them?" Niall asked.

 

Liam took a deep breath. "Well, one night, one of my dreams was Makaela and I at the park going on a date. Everything was going well until the scene changed and a muscular man wearing dark clothes took Makaela away. All I heard was her screaming in pain. Then, the scene changed and she was standing in front of me covered in blood; her holding a dead baby wrapped in a pink blanket. Her eyes were red and her cheeks were stained with dried tears. Her hair was messy but still looked beautiful and she was only wearing a white lace dress in blood stains. She looked at me with fear, hurt and mostly her eyes were filled with fury. She suddenly turned around, she screamed and I suddenly woke up holding onto Makaela's hand as if my life depended on it." Once Liam finished talking, Niall swallowed hard with his eyes wide. Shocked with the information he'd just been told, he suddenly excuses himself out of the room and went out of the hospital to make a quick phone call.

 

Niall: Abort the mission.

 

Receiver: We had a deal.

 

Niall: Let me make this loud and clear. ABORT. THE. MISSION.

 

Receiver: Doesn't work that way pretty boy. Expect to see this go through or the girl gets it.

 

Niall: Look, I said to abort the mission and I want to you to drop it. There's need to threaten me.

 

Receiver: Look pretty boy, you might want to think about who you're dealing with. I can send my boys after you and your little sissy gang of yours with that pathetic excuse of a girl. I mean, she is in a coma right? Also, you're in a lot of shit if they find out about this.

 

Niall ignoring the last part.

 

Niall: ABORT IT!

 

Receiver: Done but this is the only time to stop a mission. The next time there's another mission waiting to happen, don't expect my men and I to stop.

 

End of call.

 

3 hours to go

 

(LIAM'S POV)

 

It's finally gonna happen. What would happen to her? I still sit here, my eyes never left her gorgeous face. Her beauty captivated me the first time I saw her. I was just too much of a fuckhead to notice that she's the one I love. The lads have tried to drag, lure me out of the room and take me home (see what I did there xD) but I don't budge. As much as I want to sleep in my comfy bed, Makaela was all I had left. She was the one that kept me sane. She was the one who would want to stick with me through thick and thin but I pushed her away for popularity. She was the one who loved me for me. Why does everything bad had to happen to me?

 

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Me: So how did you guys like this chapter?

 

Makaela: Well, for starts, I'm still in a coma for the last few hours but other than that, all good. *Smiles*

 

Liam: Amee, for fucks sake, why do I still have to act depressed?

 

Me: Liam, language! You have to because Makaela's still in a coma! Are you blonde?

 

Liam: *huffs and crossed his arms*. No need to tell me twice. I think you meant the leprechaun over there *points finger to Niall*.

 

Niall: Shut up you fucker!

 

Makaela: Guys, stop fighting.

 

Liam: *Raises his arms up in defense* Hey, at least I'm not the one here making crappy story-line's and shitty POV's.

 

Meanwhile, when Liam and Makaela don't notice me writing down.

 

Me: *Takes out notepad and pen*. Kill off Liam James Payne!

 

Makaela: Liam, I can't believe you went there.

 

Liam: At least I'm telling the truth.

 

Makaela: Asshole. (Walks away).

 

Liam: *Looks over Amee's shoulder and eyes widen*. You're gonna kill me off the story?

 

Me: *Turns around* it's what you get for insulting me! Hell, I was gonna write up a killer chapter, but not Mr "I'm Too Sappy For This Story" idiot can't keep his mouth closed.

 

Liam: *Gets down on his knees and begs, literally* Pleeeeease, don't kill me off. I'll be a good boy.

 

Me: *Cocks eyebrow in amusement. Shake my head and walk away*.

 

Liam: *Trails behind like a lovesick puppy; pleading with promises and favors*. Please, please, please, don't kill me off. I'll do anything.

 

Me: *Turns around* Anything?

 

Liam: Anything, just don't kill me off. *Pleads with puppy dog eyes*.

 

Me: *Looks at him with a wicked smirk*.

 

Liam: *His face turns to regret* Oh no!

 

Again this is just a sneak peak. Honestly, how do you like it so far? Also, characters interactions on every chapter at the end! As you can see, Liam and I don't get along. Easy enough. What does AmeeSkylar have in store for Liam's "anything" plea?

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