Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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  • Published: 4 Oct 2013
  • Updated: 13 Nov 2014
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When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+


31. Chapter 27: Time (Actual Chapter)



9 hours to go


Only a couple more hours and Makaela's fate will be judged. Liam opened his eyes a bit and saw his beautiful girl peacefully sleeping. He half smiled. He didn't want her to go just yet. He realized he had been a stupid idiot and loved her. He wanted to confess his heavenly love to her when she wakes up. He never let go of her hand again. Since Liam set foot in the hospital a few hours ago, he never left her side and never let go of her hand. His grasp still tangled with hers. Her hand icy cold but her palm nice and warm. He missed his baby girl in his arms. His missed holding her, kissing her, cuddling with her and heavenly scent of vanilla perfume. He always loved her scent, he didn't want to let her go. He wanted to pour everything out to her, all the little things he loves about her.


Her body laying on the hospital bed, still and ice cold. Her knuckles were white and her hands were pale; almost like hard stone. Her face was also ice cold. Pale white she was, all he did was look at her. He was mesmerized by her inner beauty, her beautiful soul and her faint beating heart. He saw no flaws in her because his love for her grew and grew as his heart beats every day growing stronger. Liam desperately wants Makaela to wake up. Without her in his life, he's nothing. He would rather take a bullet for her and die for her than for her to take her own. Liam still feels insanely guilty for what he did to her in the past. If none of things he did happened, Makaela wouldn't be where she is today.


Liam's hand is still entwined to hers, not letting go. Still sitting on the chair, his hand locked onto hers, he kisses her hand; feeling the coldness as his lips touched her hand. But he didn't care, the only thing he felt was his warm lips onto her hand. He closed his eyes in peace. He smiled at her touch. He didn't care or paid any attention to the things around him, let alone the footsteps coming towards him and the gentle shake of someone's hand on his shoulder. Liam finally sighed giving up and turned to see Niall standing there with a concerned look on his face and holding a large bag of Nando's. Liam lightly chuckled. Niall furrowed his eyebrows. "Nando's, when are you never hungry?" Liam asked. "Uh, this is for you" Niall said giving the bag to Liam.


Liam reached for the bag but Niall quickly said "But, there is food for me too!" Liam chuckled and shook his head. Niall took a seat next to Liam and the two began eating, filling their stomachs. For Liam, Nando's was the food to give him that warm feeling just like Makaela gave her love to him. He hadn't eaten for the last few days and did feel nausea and tired at the time. Now, he was eating he now felt better. The smell of food lingered which made his stomach growl, not ignoring the fact that he's hungry and he wasn't going to go on with the feeling of being sick any longer.


After they've finished and feeling full, Liam looked at Niall and sighed. "Liam don't worry, she'll make it through mate" Niall said patting his back. Liam's jaw clenched. "Nine hours mate, nine fucking more hours to go and I can't take it any longer" Lian confessed. "I know mate but you have to stay strong for Makaela." "I know it's just, I feel she's hiding something from me and I just can't figure it out. I mean, I'm no mind reader or anything but I always feel this sudden emptiness in the pit of my stomach and the constant bad dreams I've been having lately" Liam explained. "Bad dreams as in nightmares?" Niall asked. Liam nodded. "Do you want to tell me about them?" Niall asked.


Liam took a deep breath. "Well, one night, one of my dreams was Makaela and I at the park going on a date. Everything was going well until the scene changed and a muscular man wearing dark clothes took Makaela away. All I heard was her screaming in pain. Then, the scene changed and she was standing in front of me covered in blood; her holding a dead baby wrapped in a pink blanket. Her eyes were red and her cheeks were stained with dried tears. Her hair was messy but still looked beautiful and she was only wearing a white lace dress in blood stains. She looked at me with fear, hurt and mostly her eyes were filled with fury. She suddenly turned around, she screamed and I suddenly woke up holding onto Makaela's hand as if my life depended on it." Once Liam finished talking, Niall swallowed hard with his eyes wide. Shocked with the information he'd just been told, he suddenly excuses himself out of the room and went out of the hospital to make a quick phone call.


Niall: Abort the mission.


Receiver: We had a deal.


Niall: Let me make this loud and clear. ABORT. THE. MISSION.


Receiver: Doesn't work that way pretty boy. Expect to see this go through or the girl gets it.


Niall: Look, I said to abort the mission and I want to you to drop it. There's need to threaten me.


Receiver: Look pretty boy, you might want to think about who you're dealing with. I can send my boys after you and your little sissy gang of yours with that pathetic excuse of a girl. I mean, she is in a coma right? Also, you're in a lot of shit if they find out about this.


Niall ignoring the last part.


Niall: ABORT IT!


Receiver: Done but this is the only time to stop a mission. The next time there's another mission waiting to happen, don't expect my men and I to stop.


End of call.


3 hours to go




It's finally gonna happen. What would happen to her? I still sit here, my eyes never left her gorgeous face. Her beauty captivated me the first time I saw her. I was just too much of a fuckhead to notice that she's the one I love. The lads have tried to drag, lure me out of the room and take me home (see what I did there xD) but I don't budge. As much as I want to sleep in my comfy bed, Makaela was all I had left. She was the one that kept me sane. She was the one who would want to stick with me through thick and thin but I pushed her away for popularity. She was the one who loved me for me. Why does everything bad had to happen to me?


********** TO BE CONTINUED ********** NOW **********


Also, only a couple more chapters before the release of the sequel! The "anything" plea will not happen in this chapter.


Next chapter, I'll be answering questions. Comment below your questions and I'll have them ready for the next chapter. They can be about the Author's Note(s) or the chapter(s) itself. NO further spoilers will be told instead, I'll be giving 3 hints.




Makaela: Liam!


Liam: *Mocks in a whiny tone* Makaela!


Niall (in the background): Shut the fuck up or do I have to come over there and rip your lips off your face first-hand?


Makaela and Liam looked scared and turned to Amee for help who shrugged.


Niall (in the background): That only applies to Liam!


Makaela and Amee laugh while Liam's mouth hung open.


Liam: Niall, really?!?!


Niall: *walks on set* Yes, really. Inappropriately touch my Princess off set and I will beat the shit out of you. *Wraps his arms around Makaela's waist, protectively*. You don't wanna mess with the Leprechaun, Wolf boy.


Liam swallowed in fear.


Makaela: I love you Niall.


Niall: I love you too, my Princess.


Makaela and Niall give each other an "Eskimo" kiss.


Amee: Okay ... Enough with the vice versa lovey-dove contact, let's get to the story in 3, 2 ...




Amee smacks the back of Liam's head and he groans, nods in defeat. He then wraps his arms around her waist and looks into her eyes with sadness; he stares into her eyes like a puppy dog. Amee sticks out her tongue jokingly and kisses his nose. Liam frowns. Amee rolls her eyes and gives him a peck on the lips. He grins.


Amee: Can I redo the countdown?


Liam: Of course love. *Nuzzles his head near her neck and cuddles*.


Amee: In 3, 2, 1.


- Amee




1.5 hours to go




It seems only 1.5 hours ago that I've lost my sanity as soon as my life hung by a thread. Although this does sound cheesy, my ass is still in the same place as it's ever been. I never knew how precious these last few hours they were and the moments Makaela and I had will never fade away. Still, this doesn't change the fact that it took me so long to find she was and still is The One for me and I believe she believes I'm The One for her too. If only, I knew if I am The One for her. I guess I haven't been truthful to her in the beginning. I had to make up a story on-the-spot on how we met. She believes we met in childhood but I remember differently. She doesn't know most of what happened to her memory and her brain.


I remember the time when she first cried in my arms. I remember the sadness in her eyes when she told me about her fight with her friends. I remember the time where she needed me the most and I wasn't there to protect her. I remember those sleepless nights with her when we watched Toy Story and eating loads of junk food; making up sick in the process. I remember her telling me she wanted to help me with my homework countless times. I remember her beautiful looking at her with sparks flow through her smile. I remember the way she said she loved me in a friendly manner. I remember the first fight we had when we were friends. I remember the first time I bullied her and felt horrible about it, but I never stopped.


All these things I seem to remember haunt me to this very day. Why? I know too much. I know to much because the things she may or may not remember could have a big effect on her. I mean, I hurt her and turned my back on her. The one person I called as my best friend and I bullied her to the point where she secretly cut herself - even though she thought I wouldn't be able to see the scars on her arms, faded or fresh cuts which spelt "worthless", "slut", and worst of all "unloved". I really hated myself for bullying her but it was like a dangerous drug. I was addicted and whenever I had problems of my own, I would take it out on her.


I hope Makaela can make it out alive. I cannot live without her. It's all my fault.


60 seconds later




Everyone gathered at the hospital together to stay for the final moments for Makaela. They panicked but stayed calm for the sake of Liam. Zayn and his new girlfriend Perrie were there and Perrie, having some form of knowledge about Makaela held her phone in her hands checking the time to see if they're close. She tells her side of how she knew Makaela. Despite being two years older than Makaela, they met in kindergarten and Perrie was her "buddy". They got along very well but Perrie had to move due to her family's amends for a brighter future. She didn't want to leave Makaela and they didn't stay in contact. "She was very sweet and friendly with everyone. I just can't believe this has happened to her, especially you Liam" Perrie said in a protective tone. "I know, I know, I messed up really bad" he said.


The doctor entered and cleared his throat. He called for John and told him what had happened. Everyone was staying calm and saw the look on John's face. The doctor left leaving John to face reality. He turned around and those words haunted the living out of them. "She didn't make it". Everyone froze in place. Liam shouted causing everyone in the room to wince the sight of him. Liam stormed to Makaela's room while the staff tried to calm him down but nothing was going to make him stop. He was going to see Makaela, whatever it takes. The others tried to pull Liam back but he shoves them away, causing the door to burst open to reveal Makaela's bed empty.


The room was empty.


"Where is she?" Liam growled. No one answered; they feared him. "Where. Is. She?" Liam emphasized and his growl grew deeper. One nurse spoke but her voice was shaky. "S-She was released a-and she l-left quickly". Everyone stopped moving as if the world just ended. Liam knew where Makaela was at that very moment, he left the hospital without a word. He ran back home and got into his car and drove up north, knowing and feeling deep inside Makaela was going to be there. He stopped in front of an old house.





No one else but him was there. That's when he begins to have a flashback.





Liam patted his leg for Amee to sit on. She gives him the "are-you-serious-look" in which she sighs and sits down.



Liam: Never leave me, Amee.



Amee: Mmmm, I don't know ...



Liam frowns and begins to get angry.



Amee: Joking. *Pecks his nose* Uptight idiot!



Liam: *wraps his arms around her waist and nuzzles his head near her neck* Don't make me.



Amee: *acts innocent* Don't make you what?



Liam: *Cocks eyebrow* okay, you asked for it.



Liam flexes his hands and begins to tickle her. She laughs hard and accidently falls to the ground. He then picks her up and places her back on his lap, cradling her close.



Liam: Are you hurt, babe?



Amee shakes her head and holds Liam tightly. She falls asleep in his arms.



Liam: I love you, my sweetheart.



Sorry if this is short but I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Slow updates because of school (hello HSC) and all the other goody to not-so-goody things in life.


This is Perrie Edwards in the story, what she looks like:





Don't forget to leave your questions in the comments below for me to answer for the next chapter.


Until next update:


- Amee

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