Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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  • Published: 4 Oct 2013
  • Updated: 13 Nov 2014
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When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+


29. Chapter 26: Dark Turns Light

15 hours to go


Liam's state of mind didn't go very well.  Not only is he very drunk, but thought he would go unnoticed of he just stayed at home and ignore everyone's phone calls. He hates himself for it but what else was he supposed to do? In the beginning, he was best friends with Makaela Dawson, the girl he had a massive crush on and cared the most. When high school came started, he began to bully her through hell. She suffered long and hard and he didn't give a damn about her. His injury nearly killed her every time she tried to commit suicide, and he didn't even know it.


Him and Makaela have been on and off, despite their differences, they still cared and loved each other, even if the other was in deep depression and sudden hatred forced its way down to their beating hearts. Miscommunication became and issue. Liam always thought since he remembered everything, Makaela, the girl of his dreams and him were dating ... Finally! Then, there was Zayn. Him and Liam were best mates until something happened between the two and became enemies. Unfortunately for Liam, Zayn swept Makaela off her feet with his charm and kindness while Liam only showed jealousy; which made Makaela feel happy for once.


Of course, there was no competition to offer on the table unless it was something that both Liam and Zayn would agree on. Liam messed up and he knows it and regrets it hard.


Knock. Knock. Knock.


Liam jumped a bit from his chair and heard someone was knocking on his door. He groaned and gently rubbed his temples. He got up and tried to keep his balance but fell and reached for the door knob. He was able to get back up with enough strength and opens the door. To his surprise, Zayn stands there looking at him. But he wasn't in the mood for guests. Liam was too busy wasting away his hours.


"You're drunk" Zayn said with no emotion in his tone. "What's it to you?" Liam slurred. Zayn sighed. "Look, none of us are gonna get better unless you come down to the hospital. Everyone is there: John, Hilda, Christina, Rachel, Melissa, Jennifer, Louis, Harry and Niall. They're all there. We all need to know if she's gonna be okay" Zayn said in a calm tone. "No" Liam flatly said. "Excuse me?" Zayn spat. That's when Liam cracked. "Look, I don't give a damn about what you and the others care about Makaela. She's in the hospital because of me and because of me I should be out of her life and she should never return to mine. It's best if I don't see her" he spat. "Liam, you're drunk and you're a mess. You need to see her. What if she wakes up and wants to see you?" Zayn said. Liam clenched his jaw and looked at Zayn directly in his eyes, cold. "I don't fucking care" Liam spat, taking a gulp of beer.


Zayn pushed Liam to the wall and lifted him up and held him by the collar of his shirt. The beer bottle crash breaking and the smell of the liquid fills Liam's nostrils. Zayn looks right in Liam's eyes. "You fucking do care. I see the way you look at her. I see the way she looks at you. Look, none of us want Makaela to die. Just because it's your fault doesn't mean you don't have to see her. We all want to see her but you however are not considering the possibility" Zayn said sternly. He let go of Liam and walked out of the door. He turned back "Come to the hospital and if she doesn't make it, be ready to say goodbye" Zayn said and slammed the door.


Liam sighed and cried.




At the hospital, everyone is in the Waiting Room. They were all making small talk. They see Zayn empty-handed. They all looked at him. Zayn looked down giving them all their answer. They all sighed. "He should be here even is he doesn't want to be" John said angrily. Hilda held John's hand, he looked into her eyes and he softened. Hilda rested her head on John's shoulder and he kissed her hair, their fingers entwined and sighed. Harry lightly tapped John on the shoulder, John turned his attention to him. "The girls and I are gonna get something to eat and drink. You guys want anything?" he asked. "Two tall cappuccinos and a mixed box of macaroons" John said. Harry nodded and him and the girls left. Louis and Niall were in deep conversation but their faces looked glum and sad.


They caught John's gaze at them and gave him a half smile. John returned the favour and held Hilda close to him. They sat down next to Louis and Niall to join in the conversation. "If Makaela wakes up and we all hope she does; we should throw her a welcome back party" Niall suggested. "Sounds like a great idea" Hilda said smiling. John and Louis nodded in agreement.


Harry, Christina, Jennifer, Rachel and Melissa came back with the food and drinks. Just then they see a familiar face walking towards them. Liam Payne. John was the first to recognize him and he wasn't in the best shape. John first noticed Liam's eyes and they were no longer those beautiful brown eyes, only darkness. Black eyes meant danger. His eyes were bloodshot and red, deep dark bags under his eyes, his face pale and gaunt, hair all messed up and an unshaved beard. John could see Liam's once toned figure turned to all pale, gaunt as like he hadn't eaten for days. His clothes were tattered with holes and stains of deep red dried blood with his neck, face and hands covered with bits of dried blood. John looked at Liam's knuckles - he had been punching walls out of anger and disgust. John knew Liam was a wreck - big time. Knowing Makaela could be gone before his eyes would rip his heart into pieces, Liam would shatter within minutes before falling to the ground when the time runs out.


Everyone else saw Liam and didn't dare say a word. Louis, Niall and Harry knew when Liam is at his worst, never speak a word to him because it would only result in anger, fights and regret. Everyone stayed silent for a while and went back to eating and drinking, not looking at Liam. No one dared to ask him what happened to him and where the blood came from. Liam swallowed hard. "H-Hi guys" Liam chocked. Everyone turned their attention to Liam who was now crying. Everyone stood up and hugged one at a time, those long hugs filled with love and warmth, Liam's smile began to widen each time. "Good to see you" John said. "John, you were right, I am whipped" Liam said. John chuckled.


12 hours to go


Zayn came out of the room and sees Liam with the others. Liam sees Zayn and gestures him to talk. Zayn sat beside him and sighed. "Look, before you say anything, John told me. Liam, you are whipped! There's no other girl like Makaela. She's amazing, beautiful, full of surprises and is in love with you. Sure, her and I were together but it was nothing compared when the two of you were together. You two were meant to be together" Zayn said.


Liam looked at him as Zayn continued. "She's in the room right now. Only twelve more hours to go. Go in there, sit by her side, hold her hand and don't let go. What she needs now is when she wakes up, the first she'll see is you. You, of all people, she will see you. The one who cared the most to stay by her side". Liam nodded. "You're right Zayn" was all he said. Liam took a breath and sighed. "Zayn, you were right when you knocked on my door that night. I should've been here intead of mourning over her at home. I shouldn't have let go of her hand and walked off like that. I shouldn't have to repeat past of tortured memories and relive it. Thank you Zayn" Liam said. Zayn nodded and smiled. "Go to her" Zayn said patting Liam on the back. Liam smiled.


Zayn's phone beeped and he takes it out. He smiles and starts texting back. Liam furrowed his eyebrows. Zayn sees Liam's curious face and chuckles. "Just texting a girl I met" Zayn said. "Nice, what's her name?" Liam asked. "Perri Edwards" and went back to texting. Liam smiled and got up to go to the room. He sat down and held Makaela's hand. He looked at her stunning yet damaged bruised face. The cuts were healing slowly and so were the bruises on her neck and arms too. Still holding her hand, he stood up and quickly planted his lips onto hers. The kiss was long and passionate, still fireworks exploded. He broke the kiss and sat back down. He sighed.


Baby, I'm here. Please come back to me, Makaela.





Hope you guys have enjoyed this so far!!!! A few chapters left to go! Despite this goes for 2.5 hours to read, each chapter is worth it's view. Also, like to mention that I have nothing bad towards the the girlfriends' of One Direction. Perri Edwards is finally mentioned. Eleanor Calder will appear soon in a surprise twist!


Question time: What is your favourite part in One Direction's new song 'Story of My Life'? Comment below!


PS: The music video was breathtaking. I cried (I admit!).


- Amee

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