Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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  • Published: 4 Oct 2013
  • Updated: 13 Nov 2014
  • Status: Complete
When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+


27. Chapter 24: Protection

(MAKAELA'S POV) Still in coma

After hearing those unforgettable words from Louis, I wanted to cry. The brother I had always known. John knew and so did Hilda. They both told me the moment Louis met me. He cannot know that I know this. Louis, I'm sorry but I'll pretend to not remember anything.



Louis left a few hours ago, leaving me to look at Makaela's face and sitting down to comfort her fragile body. It's been a week and five days, which means only two days left before she's gone. I'm losing hope. She may already be gone. After that intense dream, I knew after waking up it wasn't real but it felt real. I have not been myself lately and the lads can see it. They know I care and love her but I know something that can never be replaced. Liam. Let's face it. Despite the things I've done to her, I couldn't bring myself to confront her with my feelings. If I tell her she's be confused again.


What should I do? All I can do is hope that she would wake up.



Zayn genuinely wishes Makaela would wake up but everyone else wished more than Zayn for her to wake up and return to be in their lives again. There was no progress made. Makaela laid there asleep, eyes closed and the monitoring her heartbeat. Liam was the worst out of everyone. Not only did he lose his girl because of the misunderstanding, but also seeing Zayn with her tears him apart. He wasn't going to waste ten years of friendship to go down the drain. Even though him and Zayn have become best mates again, it still doesn't change the fact that Liam still has passionate feelings towards Makaela and he knows she doesn't want to admit it. The fact that she's laying on the hospital bed makes him feel guilty.


Sophia was seen in the Waiting Room and sees Liam. She smirks happily but Liam clenched his jaw and fist - hid them well. She stood up and seductively touched his torso, cheeks, hair and neck. She leaned in and whispered "Did you miss me?" He stood there not moving as he stiffened. Sophia chuckled. "No, I didn't. Leave before you regret it" Liam spat. Sophia was about to turn away but decided to play a little mind trick to see if Liam can be tamed. Her body close to his, she move her hands from his neck to his torso, feeling his abs. "You know you like it" she whispered. Liam clenched his jaw. She smiled. She began to whisper sweet nothings to him. "You know you like it when you become dominant. You know you like it when you like to make me scream and say your name. You know you like it when your drunk and remember nothing from the previous night. You know you like it when you pleasure me in ways that no other man could. You know like it when you feel the need to fuck more than ten times a day, every day because you couldn't stay away from me. You know you like it when you..." she was cut off. "Enough. What happened between us meant nothing. Makaela is in here because of you. She's in a coma because of you and she may not wake up tomorrow. I hope she wakes up so she can see you face when you are gone. You've caused enough damage not only on her life, but mine too. I finally found the girl that I want to spend the rest of my life with and you suddenly come back into my life expecting me to take you back. If you even lay a finger on her, her friends and her family, I will make sure you end up at the bottom of the food chain. Do I make myself clear?" I said sternly.


Sophia's eyes widen and nodded vicariously; alarmed what he would do if she didn't obey. She turned around and ran out of the hospital. He breathed a sigh of relief. "You're whipped" a voice said. Liam turned and sees John standing behind him with his arms folded. Liam looked down "Yeah, I am" he murmured. "Looks like you got some stiff competition then" he said. Liam furrowed his eyebrows. "Zayn's falling for her, not whipped like you." Liam nodded. He knew Zayn would still like her. He couldn't blame him.


The thought of being "whipped" made him chuckle. John stood next to Liam, his hands tucked in his jean's pockets. They both sigh hoping there was a miracle.



One more day and she'll be gone. I just hope she would wake up. John left leaving me alone with Makaela. Zayn enters and sees me and gives me a nod an answer he'll watch her tonight. I nodded, kissed Makaela's cheek and left. I went home that night, not wanting to stick around and be the first to make the dreading call to everyone. I tried sleeping but I couldn't. All I could think about was Makaela.



After Hilda and I prepare for tomorrow, we still try to act as if nothing happened. Of course, it didn't work. My little sister in hospital. I called the police of who I think may be behind the brutal attack. It took me a while to piece things together; I thought I had the answer but wanted to double check. I decided to update them.


Receiver: Yes okay. We will look into their files to find any hidden clues or specific evidence and we'll get back to you.


John: Thank you officer.


Receiver: Now, before I ask anything more, do you know anyone who would try to murder your sister?


I paused and swallowed.


John: Yes, I'm one hundred per cent sure that the two people I suspect are behind it.


Receiver: Okay. Can you give me the names of the two people?


John: Yes. Liam Payne and Sophia Smith.


Receiver: Tell me a bit about the two suspects.


John: Liam bullied my sister when they started high school and since then, he's been nothing but trouble. He has a poor record of huge complaints of fighting, drug use, swearing, skipping classes or school, bullying and the list goes on. Sophia, I've had my suspicions on this girl. She was jealous of the fact that Liam ended the relationship between them and he began to date my sister after confessing he loved her. Makaela is still in the hospital in a coma.


Receiver: Mhm. Okay from what you've told me is relevant. Thank you. We will keep you updated.


John: Thank you for your time.


The line went dead.




SOPHIA IS GONE! But, will she return?


Hope you guys are enjoying so far! Will Makaela come out of the coma before they pull the plug? Will there be more problems concerning with Makaela? Did John make a mistake?


Time is running out! Time is what Makaela needs.


PS: Sequel not long to go. Currently, adding chapters in advance but waiting to publish after this Movella is done!

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