Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+

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25. Chapter 22: Nightmare In Her Own State Of Mind

(ZAYN'S POV)

It's been three days and Makaela still has her eyes closed. Counting down the days was hard. I stayed in the hospital but would visit every second day and stay there not leaving until she wakes up. During those three days, I didn't leave the room. I didn't go home. I didn't visit any of the lads. I didn't call anyone. I ate little but not enough to fill me up. My eyes had dark circles under the socket of my eyes. I was tired but I tried to stay up for Makaela. Then, reality hit me. What happens when it gets to the day of two weeks - she'll be gone forever, out of my touch, out of my grasp. More importantly, my life without her. Before her, I had nothing to call "mine". When we were together, she was mine and I felt happy. But, after finding out the terrible truth, I had to let her go. I still have feelings for her but I've learnt to let them go and just accept the fact that I'm her friend. She hasn't friend-zoned me. I messed up. She was confused and upset. She was torn between two guys who used to be best friends.

 

Looking at her wrecked face, all I see is her beauty in the inside. It didn't matter to me if her face was wrecked or her body, just as long as she was safe and well. Of course, my hopes of rekindling the relationship between us wasn't going to happen. She may have forgiven me but not completely. I know what I've done to deserve such hatred against me; particularly coming from Makaela. And, if you were wondering, I didn't even try to have sex with her. I pretty much knew she did with Liam. I mean, those two have known each other for years and the thought of it makes me feel that I want that memory of the two of them to be just her and I. I shake the thought off and see Louis next to me. I didn't even hear him come in. I looked at Makaela and sighed. I just hope she wakes up.

 

(LOUIS'S POV)

I entered the room to find Zayn there. He hasn't left since Makaela was taken to the hospital. Unfortunately, the rest of us were told by phone from John and Hilda. I was devastated. I mean, this is my sister who is at the hospital in a coma. I've got to tell her now or I won't have another chance. "Zayn, you look tired. Maybe you should go home and take a rest and come back tomorrow" I said. He turned around to see me and nodded. "Yeah, your right. Cya mate" he said and left the room. I sat down and held Makaela's hand. I sighed. I took a deep breath and decided to tell her everything; even though she can't hear mean.

 

"Makaela, it's Louis. I don't know how to tell you this. It's kinda hard to tell really. All these years I've been keeping a secret from the others, including the management. My mum decided to tell me the secret that she had been keeping for a long time and I reacted to it very badly. I was sad and I didn't want to talk to anyone about because it was that big and surely, the media would find out and I'm afraid to see you get hurt or even worse, gone. I don't know if you could hear me but, I'm just gonna go ahead and say it. Makaela, I'm your long lost brother. As hard as it to believe, it is crazy. I don't really know what happened, not too much though. All I know is that the parents you grew up with are your real parents, just my mum was with your father and mum had you but gave you up because she didn't want to live with the guilt inside. She gave you to your dad. It was hard knowing this secret and maybe when you wake up, you'll might remember or not remember this" I said.

 

I sighed. "I should've been there and told John about it but I was scared to think he would say I'm crazy or a liar. I miss my little sister. We are siblings by blood. John is your blood brother but for some reason, he is not my mum's son. Kinda messed up really." I stopped talking and looked down at my watch. 3:30pm was the time. I half smiled. "I missed everything. I didn't talk to mum for a week. I didn't visit at all. I forgave her but not completely. I need my little sister right now. I want to give you the biggest hug. I want to comfort you when you're feeling down or scared. I want to scare the lights at someone who breaks your heart. I want to protect you from bullies and bad things. I want to let you know that I love you with everything, even though I wasn't there for you. I miss you" I said. "I'm not ready to tell the rest of the lads or to the entire world. I love you little sis. Always have, always will" I said.

 

"I miss you little sis. Just not sure if you'll wake up with this news" I said.

 

(ZAYN'S POV)

"Zayn, you look tired. Maybe you should go home and take a rest and come back tomorrow" I said. He turned around to see me and nodded. "Yeah, your right. Cya mate." I left the hospital. I went to the parking lot and got in my car and went home. I then realised I left my phone at the hospital and it was turned off. I sighed. I drove back the to hospital and went to the room but realised Louis was still there but he was talking. I stopped in my tracks and heard something that made my heart sank.

 

"I want to give you the biggest hug. I want to comfort you when you're feeling down or scared. I want to scare the lights at someone who breaks your heart. I want to protect you from bullies and bad things. I want to let you know that I love you with everything, even though I wasn't there for you. I miss you" he said.

 

My eyes widen in shock. Louis loves Makaela. I knocked on the door and Louis turned around. "Hey mate, thought you went home" he said nervously. "Yeah but then I realised I left my phone here" I said keeping it casual. "Oh well, here" he said, throwing the phone to me and caught it. "Thanks man" I said and left. I left the hospital and turned on my phone. As I was waiting for the phone to turn on, I got into my car and drove home. I locked the car and unlocked the door to my apartment. Once I got in, I didn't feel like eating anything so I went to talk a shower and put on a pair of briefs and sweat pants. I got in bed and my phone was on. I saw I had one missed call and a new voice mail. I furrowed my eyebrows. I shrugged and pressed the call button to play the voice mail message. I held the phone to my ear and listened.

 

"Zayn, it's Makaela. Please help me."

 

I froze as my eyes widen. The voice mail was from Makaela. That sent a chill down my spine. She needed help, my help and my bloody fucking phone was off when this happened. I swallowed hard and sighed. I checked to see when the voice mail was made but decided to ask the doctor tomorrow. I put my phone on charge and let my head fall back and sleep. Then, I had a dream.

 

(MAKAELA'S POV) - Still in a coma

 

As I lay there taking in Louis' words, a tear falls down.

 

I heard you, Louis. My big brother. I've known all along.'

 

I wanted to scream out those words but I couldn't. Laying there still and eyes still closed. When will my life become clear instead of having to suffer and fall into misery?

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