Remember Me (Liam Payne Fanfiction)

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  • Published: 4 Oct 2013
  • Updated: 13 Nov 2014
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When 18 year old Makaela Dawson moves to a private high school because of all the painful bullying from her tormentors from her previous high school, she never thought she would encounter her old best friend, Liam Payne. Liam Payne, her former best friend who changed completely: Became a major jerk, a bad boy and hangs around with the wrong crowd. Self-destructive, suicidal and depressed, she suddenly realises that she needed Liam more than ever. But what happens when she starts to have a crush on his former best friend, kind and sweet Zayn Malik? Who has an alter ego? Will Zayn protect her from Liam? Will Makaela crack under pressure? Will Liam remember who she is before the time runs out? (Before X Factor) WARNING: Foul Language, sexual references and Excessive Bullying. Read at your own risk. 16+


24. Chapter 21: You'd Be The Death Of Me

Previously on Chapter 21: Friends


Makaela went home with Hilda. John wasn't home yet but told Hilda he would in a while. Makaela decided to change and go to the park. She got changed into something comfortable and casual.



Makaela tied her hair in a messy bun. She applied a light touch of baby pink lip gloss and grabbed her phone. "I'll be back before six o'clock" Makaela said. "Okay, have fun" she said. Makaela left the house and walked to the park. She sat down on the bench looking at the sky. She smiled.


"John and I miss you, mum and dad. We both miss you" Makaela said. Just then, she felt a pair of hands on her shoulders. It was getting dark and she couldn't see anything. She then realised she had been out longer than she thought. She slowly turning around to see who it standing behind her. She gasped and screamed.




With her eyes wide open she kept screaming. She stopped and yanked herself off the stranger and ran off not looking back. She quickly dialed Zayn's number. It went straight to voice mail. "Zayn, it's Makaela. Please help me" she panicked and ended the call putting the phone in her pocket. She kept running as she heard someone running behind her. She ran faster, using all her strength and will-power to get away. The fear was catching up to her. She sees nothing and stops. She breaths heavily. She can't see anything. Just then, she was on the ground unconscious. Everything went blurry and she blacked out.



I lay there unconscious but I can still hear. I hear voices. The voice inside me wants to wake up but something is holding me back. I lay there still and motionless. I hear voices once more. "What happened to her. No please, she's my sister?" John. "She was going for a walk and said she would be back before six o'clock." Hilda. "Let me in, please." Zayn. There was more yelling from various voices that I couldn't make of but those three distinctive voices from John, Hilda and Zayn I can tell. I just want to wake up and tell them I'm here and well but I can't. I feel Zayn's hand on mine as he cries. I can hear John and Hilda sobbing as they ask the doctor what was wrong. My eyes stayed shut like glue.



"Let me in please" I said as I tried to get past the doctor. "Sir, you will need to wait in the Waiting Room, family members are allowed in the patient's room only" the doctor said. "Please, she's my girlfriend. I need to see her and I need to see if she is going to be okay" Zayn said as he controlled himself. He clenched his jaw. What a great lie, Zayn. The doctor sighed. "Alright, you can go in" he said and the doctor left the room to speak with John and Hilda. Zayn entered the room and saw Makaela. She was cut up; her arms with a few bruises, her left cheek swollen, a cut on her lip, dried blood near the top of her forehead. Zayn grabbed a chair and sat there holding onto Makaela's hand as he cried. "Whoever did this, I will hunt and destroy them" he said. "That's a promise" he said, as he glanced at her face. Her beautiful face. He kissed her right cheek for a while, not wanting to let go. He broke off and sighed.


Just then, Louis, Harry and Niall enter the room and see Zayn. They all knew how much he cared for Makaela. The boys pat him on the back and said that everything would be okay. Zayn was angry; angry that someone at night would beat a girl defenseless. The boys praised for Makaela to come back and told Zayn they would visit again tomorrow. John and Hilda came back into the room to tell Zayn what she has. John looked at him and breathed. "She's in a coma" he said as Hilda cried. "They don't know when she's gonna wake up. If she doesn't wake up in two weeks, they're gonna pull the plug" John said as he cried, holding Hilda close to him. Zayn stood there frozen in shock. He begged Makaela to wake up for him.


I just hope she would wake up and I would see her pretty face again.



That boyfriend stealing bitch didn't know it was coming. She'll think Liam did it! My plan is working. Liam will be an emotional wreck and he'll be back in my life as my boyfriend in no time. Attacking Makaela at night was perfect. I was careful so she wouldn't see me. I was in all black so she couldn't have seen me. Smirking at myself, I saw the caller ID and it was Liam. I grinned. I knew he'd come crawling back. She accepted. "We need to talk. Meet me at Starbucks in fifteen minutes" he growled and hung up. Her eyes widen. He fucking knows. But ... How? Shit.



After finding out Makaela is in the hospital, I cried. I should be gone away from her life but I can't.I still love her. I knew Sophia did this, she hates Makaela with every bone in her body. I'll snap her like a twig if Makaela doesn't make it. No Liam, don't say that. She will make it, she will. She's a fighter. It's all Sophia's fault. If she hadn't fucking smashed her lips onto mine, none of this would've happened. I hate Sophia. I want Makaela in my arms, smiling and laughing when we were together. She belongs with me. I know she does. My heart races a thousand miles an hour every time I see her and when we broke up and whenever I see her with Zayn, my heart drops and breaks into a million pieces. Even though they're not together, I still feel jealous. Yes, I said I was jealous, I admit it. I truly love Makaela and the fact that she's no longer my girlfriend triggers the damaged "bad boy" everyone in the school knew. I don't want to to go back there again because I would hurt her.


Sophia is none other than a slut who cares only about herself and doesn't give a shit about who she steals, beats and manipulates. I knew from the beginning she was damaged goods. But no, Management "set us up" so we could be together. More like forced to do so than be kicked out of the band. I'm going to talk to her face to face and get her to confess.


This means war.



I think I may have a pretty good idea who punched the lights out of my sister at night: Liam Payne. It only makes sense - he's been bullying her ever since they were on their first year of high school. I should've seen it coming. Maybe he was using Makaela to make her fall in love with him, shagged her innocence and dignity and humiliated her some more. I forgot to have a talk with him about shagging my sister. Bad enough that she's in hospital and in a coma fighting for her life.


I just hope she fights her way out and come back to us.

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