my messed up life ~ COMPLETED

Eleanor is sixteen. she has a large family and one of her brothers is Louis Tomlinson. her mum reveals she has a twin brother and she is forced to move to essex. she has her boyfriend back home in doncaster, but she slowly finds herself falling for Harry. will she make the right decision or will she be left broken.

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13. Carl

It was three weeks later. I had officially left school and did quite well. Finished my GCSE's and got A's and A*. I was quite pleased. All of the others were going off to College. Tommy, Abby and Conor were at mine and we were packing all of my stuff with Billy and Louis. “do you need this?” Tommy asked me and held up one of my sweatshirts. I nodded. “you can't need all of these clothes,” Louis said.

“Erm excuse me Louis a girl can never have enough clothes,” Abby demanded. He held his hands up in surrender and I just laughed. “ELEANOR THERE'S SOMEONE HERE FOR YOU!!” Marcus shouted. I ran downstairs to the door. Only to see Carl.

“hey baby I heard you were moving,” he said.

“yeah so bye,” I said and tried to shut the door. He shoved his foot and pushed me out of his way. “you didn't really think we were over,” he said.

“yeah I did, because we are,” I said.

“aw come on you know you won't do any better, i'm the best you going to do,” he said. I lost it. I slapped him. “anybody would be better than you.” I snapped. He grabbed my t-shirt and threw me outside onto the floor. Louis, Billy and the others ran out and saw me. “OI LEAVE HER!!” Harry shouted and punched him. Tommy ran forward and pulled me up. I ran over to Harry and he hugged me. Louis ran at Carl. He punched him and brought him to the floor and started attacking him. Jack and Ricky pulled him up. “our turn,” they said and jumped on Carl and punched him and kicked him. George and Marcus went next and attacked him. “STOP PLEASE!” I cried. They stopped. Billy walked forward. “Billy,” I said. He held up his finger. “one more thing Carl,” he said. Carl stood up just as Billy punched him in the face. “you leave our sister alone you bastard,” he said. Carl ran down the drive and into his car and drove off. “come on lets finish packing,” Abby said and grabbed my hand and we ran upstairs.

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