My Step Brother

"Our parents...they don't have to know. We can be a secret." Louis said, coming closer and closer to me and moved back until I reached the wall. Louis was right in front of me; his hand resting right next to my head.
"But- what if they, you know, find out?" I asked, my voice shaking due to how close Louis was.
"They won't. It'll just be our little secret" Louis said, his face inching towards mine.
"Works for me" I said, grabbing his head and pulling his head in to kiss him.


58. Chapter 58


What's he doing here?

Feeling my intense stare, he looked up from his drink; his eyes widening as he saw me.




According to most books that I've read, the girl usually dumps her current boyfriend (who is probably a rebound) for her ex. When she sees them again, it's as if there is a burning passion for her to be with him. I always thought that would happen; with Louis and I. 

Obviously, I knew we wouldn't run into each others arms and confess our undying love for each other. 

That would be too awkward for words (not too mention inappropriate).

He looked so different. Where was his signature red trousers and striped top? And what about his suspenders? Where was that Louis? This isn't Louis. It can't be. He's not the same Louis I remember. It's like he completely transformed into a whole new person. 

He was wearing a leather jacket with a black top and black skinny jeans. In between the bottom of his neck and the the top part of his chest was some tattooed words. I couldn't read what it said but I only saw the word 'What'.

Oh my gosh...

I don't remember Louis ever getting tattoos. When we were dating, he was always making fun at everyone- saying that tattoos were for people trying to be badass. He was always against them for some reason and now... he's covered in them. 

We stared at each other for a good few minutes, speechless. Before I could open my mouth to say anything else, two voices screeched into my ears.

"Erm, like, who are you? Like, we are like, Louis Tomlinson's biggest fans so like, we'd know if you were like, dating him or whatever. So who the fuck are you?"

I turned around, seeing the two girls who were previously giggling like a pack of hyenas. 

"I'm Amber" I said stupidly. 

"Wow thanks for enlightening us with that information." said hyena number 1.

Well you did ask...

"What she meant was how does Louis Tomlinson know you." snorted hyena number 2.

"I was his, er..." I glanced back at Louis, only to see his blank expression. 

"His step-sister." I turned back to them. 

"What the actual fuck? Don't lie- he never had any step-sisters," the hyenas cackled. 

'Wow, and you call yourselves his 'biggest fan' ', I thought, mentally rolling my eyes. 

"It's your choice if you want to believe me but I don't care if you don't so why don't you two just hurry back to Scar and go see what he wants." I blurted out.



Wow, Amber, just wow. 

In return for my stupidity, I got blank stares from both girls. 

"Scar?" Hyena 1 said. 

Did they not watch Lion King? Seriously, what are they doing with their lives?

"Ugh, just, erm n-nevermind. Hum, I-I'll go now." I stuttered, turning towards the exit. 

Shit, where's the fiery red head girl, or otherwise known as Cynthia, when you need her. 

I looked outside and saw that it started to snow. Shit, I need to seriously go.

"Bye" I mumbled, walking out of the shop. 

"Wait!" I heard a voice call from behind me. I completely forgot about him, wow Amber you really are on a roll today. I felt his hand grasp my mine but I quickly pulled away from him and turned around to face him. 

"So, erm it's nice to meet you Amber." He said nervously, which totally contradicted his appearance.

"Nice to meet you too." I said cautiously, not knowing where this conversation is going. 

"It's been a long time." I said, looking around, not knowing what to say.

"Yeah it has." He said, staring at me intensely. 

He cleared his throat before asking, "So how is he?"


"That dude you're marrying." He said shortly.



"Erm, he's erm, he's good." I stuttered, mentally face palming myself. No, Amber, you can't talk about your fiancé with your ex-boyfriend, it's wrong in so many ways. Abort, I repeat abort Amber!!

"Yeah so it was catch up with you but I've got to go. My friend is waiting for me outside so yeah, I need to go." I stumbled, turning away to leave. 

"Amber!" He shouted again. What does he want from me?


"Thanks for the invite."

"Invite for what?" I asked, swivelling round.

"You know, to your wedding." He said. He had a blank emotion, making it hard for me to guess whether he was being sarcastic or genuinely happy.



"Huh?" I replied, probably sounding like an idiot. 

"Your dad called me up and asked if I could make it." He began, "But it's fine if you don't want me to come, I don't ca-"

"No, it's fine. I just didn't know that he invited you. You're welcome to come." I said, awkwardly. 

"Yeah." He gruffed.

"So erm, bye?" I asked, wondering if he was going to call my name again. 

"Bye." He said briefly, before turning away and walking back inside Starbucks. 


Hi *waves frantically*

I was wondering whether you wanted me to rewrite this but in Louis' POV for the next chapter or do you want me to just carry on with the book?

Please comment with your opinions :)

Also, I love getting comments from you guys but it kinda sucks when I literally just update a chapter and people message me saying 'update'. Trust me, if I could, I'd be writing new chapters like each day but I have like really important exams coming up next year and I actually need to revise (weird ikr).

I know most people don't do this but yeah :)

So what's everyone doing for Christmas btw, I'm going to America lol (I love that country so much <3)


-Neha x

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