My Step Brother

"Our parents...they don't have to know. We can be a secret." Louis said, coming closer and closer to me and moved back until I reached the wall. Louis was right in front of me; his hand resting right next to my head.
"But- what if they, you know, find out?" I asked, my voice shaking due to how close Louis was.
"They won't. It'll just be our little secret" Louis said, his face inching towards mine.
"Works for me" I said, grabbing his head and pulling his head in to kiss him.


24. Chapter 24


He's probably put off by the fact that I'm a virgin. I know he is. 

"Really? Louis asked, amused. He had a happy expression on his face? Probably to tease me. 

"Y-Yeah" I hesitated, still avoiding eye contact with Louis which was hard considering he was literally lying on top of me with his head slightly above mine. 

Look at something else...... Oooh, look a tree. A blade of grass.

Louis' index finger went under my chin and pulled it up so I was forced to look at him. 

"You don't know how happy I am that you are one. I want to be your first and your last. I want to be the only one to touch you like that" He said, looking into my eyes. 

It felt like a huge weight was taken off my chest. How perfect can he possibly get?

"You'll be my only, Louis. I promise" I said, truly meaning what I said. I couldn't imagine any other person in place of Louis. Is this what true love feels like?

Louis leaned his head in until our noses were touching. He raised his hands and gently stroked my cheek,

"I love you, Amber"

"I love you too, Louis" 

Louis slowly went to place his lips on mine and started to kiss me. We just told each other that we loved each other. I felt myself smiling against that kiss, I tried to stop myself but I just couldn't help it. Looks like Louis couldn't stop himself either because he was smiling from ear to ear.

Once he pulled away, we both got up. 

"We should probably go now" I said, noticing how dark it was getting.

"Yeah, we shouldn't get our parents suspicious." He said, scratching the back of his neck. He does that when he's nervous. 

To be honest, I was nervous too. I didn't like going behind my parents' back. True, they're not married yet but they are going to be. I felt my stomach twist into a knot at that. Don't get me wrong, I love Joannah and my dad together. Dad's been just generally so much happier when he's with her. Not that he wasn't happy when it was just me, him and Zach but he's been more cheerful.

If they find out about Louis and I, I don't want to see the look on dad's face. I can see the love in his eyes whenever he's near Joannah and......... it's just break his heart. But then again, it'll also break my heart when they get married.

I sighed deeply, trying to relax myself of these thoughts that were starting to make my mind spin. 

"Come on" Louis said, holding my hand and walking back to his car in silence

We got inside and started to drive off. There was a silence spreading in the car, not an awkward silence but at the same time, not a comfortable one. I could literally feel the thick tense atmosphere. 

Maybe, I should talk to Louis about this.

"Louis......." I said awkwardly

"mmhh?" Louis said, his eyes fixated on the road ahead of him

"Um... about dad and your mum, uh, y-you know they're going to uh, you know," Why was I stuttering like crazy? Louis cut me off by taking on hand of the steering wheel and placing it on top of mine. He gently rubbed his thumb over the part under my knuckles and above my wrist.

"Amber, I've been thinking about it too. Don't worry about it. Live in the moment because everything else is uncertain" He said.

"Deep" I said, suprised that Louis, the cute, clumsy, cuddly, perverty bear could come up with something so serious and deep.

"Way to ruin the moment Amber!" He said, pouting.

"It was weird for something deep like that to come from you" I said, shrugging.

"It's weird for me to be deep?" Louis said smirking and raising his eyebrows.

Oh great...... I know that voice..... cue dirty comment......

"I'll show you how deep I go, Amber" He leaned into my ear as we stopped at a red light.

My eyes widened as I felt my cheeks turning their tomato colour again. 

"Shut up, perv!" I said playfully pushing him back to his own seat.

"I'm only your pervert Amber" He said, holding my hand again.

Despite how dirty it was, it was still romantic and a rush of butterflies still burst out in my stomach. 

Before I knew it, we were parked into the driveway to Louis' house. I looked over at the time that was next to the thing that said how much petrol was in the car. 10:00.

Damn. This is going get really awkward and suspicious. 

I stopped Louis as he was about to step out of the car. 

"Louis, what are we going to say to them? I told them that we started dinner at 8:30. it's been 1hr and 30 mins!" I panicked.

Louis' expression was like mine. Panicked. "Uh-Uh...."

*Knock knock*

"AGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I screamed loudly. I jumped into Louis' arms. I buried my head into his chest. This is it. I'm going to die. I'm only 18. I'm too you to die. The-

"Amber? Louis?" A voice came from outside the car. Dad. Luckily the windows were tinted so he couldn't the position I was in right now. 

"Dad?" I called out confused,

'What are you doing here?" Isn't he supposed to be sleeping by now.

I got out of Louis' arms and went outside the car to meet Dad standing just outside the car door with his arms crossed and a frown embedded on his face.

"What were you two doing out so late? How long do you guys take to eat dinner!" He said, angrily.

"Uh-uh........" I hesitated. By now, Louis was standing next to me, not helping me at all. He was stuttering like I was.



We both said at the same time. We turned our heads to each other and gave a paniced look. 

"Um... what we mean was .... that we were....bonding. And uh- we went shopping then to a park?" I said. It came out more of a question though.

"Shopping? Aren't all the shops closed by now?" Dad asked still suspicious.

"Um, we were window shopping" Louis finally said. 

"Oh, okay then. It's good to see both my children bonding with each other. You should really do it more often. That way you get to know each other better"   Dad said, smiling before walking inside the house, leaving the door open for us.

"You know, I agree with your dad. We should get to know each other better" Louis said with a wink. I just giggled and rolled my eyes at him before walking inside.

"Soo, night" I said, walking off to my bedroom only to be pulled back by Louis.

"Where do you think you're going?" He asked.

"To-" I began, before he cut me off.

"You're sleeping with me." He said. 

As much as I wanted to, I decided to tease him a little and play hard to get.

'And why would I want to do that?" I asked, crossing my arms over my chest.

"Because......... the demons and the monsters under my bed scare me" He said, pouting like a little kid and looking down at the floor. I could tell he was just trying to get my emotional side out and let's just say I'm a very emotional person.

I wrapped my arms and pecked Louis' lips.

"'Course I will, Lou. I-" I began when he suddenly grabbed my wrist and pulled me into his bedroom. 

"Nice to see your eager" I joked.

Louis blushed slightly. He took off his top and that's when I realsied something. 

"Um.....Louis, I don't have anything to wear for bed" I told him. I could go back to my bedroom and get my stuff but my parents would probably wake up at all the noise.

"You can just wear mine" He said, tossing me the top he had just discarded.

"Thanks" I said, walking into Louis' bathroom. I took off my top and jeans and pulled Louis' plain grey top over my head. It reached mid-thigh. 

I opened the bathroom door to find Louis lying on his bed, looking at me. I suddenly felt a tiny bit self cautious. I pulled Louis' top further down my legs to try and cover my thighs up but it wasn't working.

Louis' eyes widened when he saw me.

"You look good in my clothes" He said as I got into next to him.

"You should wear them more often" He continued as he tucked a stand of hair behind my ear and kissing it.

"I love you sou much it hurts Amber" He said, snuggling his head into my hair. His arms were around my waist, holding me protectively. 

"I love you too, Louis. You're the most perfect boyfriend any one could ever ask for" I said, cuddling closer to him.


Sorry for the chapter.

I've got this massive headache and cramps :( 

But yeah I still updated :)

Guess what???


It's an INSET day at school tomorrow (staff training day) so I'm gonna be at home all day XD


So expect at least update.......might even do a marathon if I'm up for it ;)

Btw the deadline for the competition is when I finish school and come back home (so around 4:15 pm London time. Just use a world time converter thing to see what time that'll be where you guys live :)

Just wanted to say, I read all your comments. I notice every single one. Wow..... I sounded like a stalker then :S

Anyway, I do read all your comments and entries for the competition. I'll try and reply to loads of them :)

If you haven't already seen my comment below,

I've already picked out the winners for each category but it's not final yet cause just in case more people decide to enter between now and Friday. 

Also, if you're still actually reading this really long A/N, I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 xo


And what do you think of my new cover???? 

-Neha (<----- that's my name btw) or if you prefer just call me Tiger99 :)



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