Lame.

And when the night gets dark, and there's no way back, I'll call your name, but it's fading, we're fading; After leaving school for nine months, Fenella is ready to go to high school again.... Just not ready to face her best friend and former crush Calum. What Calum doesn't know is that he's the father of Fenella's baby. When given the chance to raise his child, even though both parents are only 16, the opportunity is taken away when he finds out that Fenella is going out with his now ex-friend Ashton Irwin.

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31. Feeback

Ok, so hi guys! Lanna here! 

 

This is just a random not chapter asking for what you guys think. I'm writing another Movella and it would help to get some feedback, like what could I do to make my writing better? Should I improve my vocabulary? Should I stop writing at all? I want to make this new story one of my best ones yet, but I'll need your help! So comment below, or comment on one of my mumbles. 

 

All feedback is greatly appreciated :) 

 

Have a wonderful day/night! 

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