Louis' Daughter

This is MY story. The story how I became Max Tomlinson, the amazing daughter of Louis Tomlinson ;)
Shall we say, it is somehow interesting?

"Dad!" I exclaimed and stood up running to him.
"Hey there Max!" Louis said hugging me. "I heard you want to spend some alone time with me."
"Yes." I smiled. "What else did you hear?"
"Everything." Louis half smiled. "Shall we?"


33. You and I




"So I have a right for a date?" I tilted my head to the right and made puppy eyes to Louis.

"Max." Louis sighed. "Who are you going to bring?"

"Umm." I said as I pretended to think, but a smile betrayed me. "Mike." I giggled.

"Are you like, back together?" Louis questioned. 

"We are on the process." I replied with a shrug. "So? Can I bring him?"

"Sure." Louis winked. "Take your camera, we need a nice video." 

"Of course daddy." I winked. "I'm going to call Mike and let him know." I added. "And later... I might need to go and buy a dress..."
"Here." Louis said handing me money. "Decent one."

"Always." I kissed his cheek and ran to the living room.


I was jumping singing You & I, texting Mike about the fancy dinner One Direction was having, and that I needed to attend, and that luckily I could bring him along. He was thrilled and told me that he needed to go and rent a suit, so I told him to pick me up around three, cause I needed to buy a dress. 


"Why the big smile?" Harry questioned as he sat next to me on the couch.

"I have a date for tonight." I replied. 

"Really?" Harry questioned. "And who would it be? Cause you haven't asked me."

"HARRY STOP FLIRTING WITH MY DAUGHTER!" Louis shouted as he entered the kitchen, making us laugh. 

"Mike." I replied with a smile. "I asked Mike to tag along and he is."

"Are you a thing again?" Harry questioned.

"Working on that." I replied with a wink. 

"But I thought he broke your heart." Harry said. 

"Yeah." I said. "But he is also the only one who can fix it." I shrugged.

"If he ever hurts you again, I will personally shave his head off." Harry pointed a finger at me.

"I'll tell him." I replied waving my hands in surrender. "Oh hey! BYE!" I shouted as I received a text from Mike. 

"Where are you going?" Zayn questioned as he followed me to the door. 

"Shopping." I replied. 

"Who's taking you?" Niall asked appearing out of nowhere. 

"Mike." I replied and dashed out the door. "I'LL BE BACK!" 




*Mike's P.O.V.*


Max came running towards the car, it was really nice to see her again so carefree and loveable. She kissed my cheek and I drove us to the shopping centre, I was really nervous about this fancy dinner. Rumours would start once again...


"Miiike!" Max sang as we walked towards a store. 

"Yeah?" I questioned grabbing her hand.

"I'm so nervous for tonight." She breathed.

"Why?" I asked furrowing my eyebrows.

"I have to sing." Max pulled a face.

"That's awesome!" I kissed her temple. "Shall we look for the perfect dress?"

"We have to be home before six." Max said and I nodded. 


After one hour of Max trying dresses, she complained that it was too boring and the she wanted a cute top red dress. I agreed with her, because she looked divine in that particular dress, who am I kidding, she looked amazing in all of them. 


Max paid for her dress and we wen rover to the Mr. TUX (Rent your Tux) store to rent my tux. (Isn't it funny and confusing?)


"Red tie." Max smiled. "We should match."

"Of course." I smiled down at her. 

"This one?" She questioned pointing at a simple yet gorgeous black tie. 

"I will go and try it on." I replied.

"I'll wait." Max chuckled. "It's my turn." 



*Max's P.O.V.*



I was scrolling down my twitter when I heard a small cough, I look up and Mike was standing right in front of me looking drop dead gorgeous in his suit. 


"Wow." I breathed. "You look HOT."

Mike laughed. "I guess I'm taking this one?"

"Yeah." I beamed. 

"OK." Mike said. "I'll go change back."


I nodded and stared as he walked away. Damn he's hot. 


After he paid for the suit, he took me back home so that I could get ready for the dinner. I took a shower, and changed into my dress, someone fixed my hair and makeup, and BOOM I was ready for the dinner. I walked out of my room towards the living room, when I heard Mike laughing with the boys. I was happy that they were accepting him again. 


"MAX!" Louis shouted. "COME ON LOVE WE HAVE TO GO!"

"I'm here." I whispered and everyone turned to face me and their expression changed. "Is it good?" I questioned unsure.

"Holy fuck Max." Niall said. "You look HOT."

"NIALL!" Louis exclaimed. "Listen to me Max. You're to stay with us, I can't have you going out like that, you should be wearing a nun dress."

"Daad!" I whined.

"I'm kidding love." Louis kissed my head. "Let's hit it."




I was laughing whilst I recorded the boys interact with the people when Mike came to me. 


"You sounded amazing." Mike whispered to my ear as he hugged me from behind. 

"Thanks." I said in a small voice. 

"I have a question." Mike said.

"Yeah?" I questioned.

"You and I." Mike said. "How does it sound?"

"Are you asking me out?" I chuckled.

"Yes." Mike replied with a goofy smile.

"You and I." I replied before kissing him. 


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