Louis' Daughter

This is MY story. The story how I became Max Tomlinson, the amazing daughter of Louis Tomlinson ;)
Shall we say, it is somehow interesting?

"Dad!" I exclaimed and stood up running to him.
"Hey there Max!" Louis said hugging me. "I heard you want to spend some alone time with me."
"Yes." I smiled. "What else did you hear?"
"Everything." Louis half smiled. "Shall we?"


7. Meet Mike



"Wake up Max." Liam said as he opened the curtains, so that the sun could enter. 

"Go away Liam." I said hiding underneath my blankets.

"Come on Max." Liam said. "You said your friend was going to come today. Louis left with Harry and Zayn to buy the things to make lunch, and I need you and Niall to help me clean this house."

"It is not my fault it is a mess." I stated sitting up.

"You still live here don't you?" Liam asked.

"I hate you." I said getting up.

"I love you too." Liam laughed. "Meet me downstairs. You're on living room duty."

"But that's like the messiest part of the house." I complained.

"Who's friend is it?" Liam asked.

"Argh!" I complained. "Who wants to meet him?"

"Touché." Liam said. "Still. Louis said to move it."

"What if he cancelled?" I asked as I walked behind Liam.

"He didn't." Liam replied. "Now, go and clean."

"Which is your duty?" I asked.

"Bathrooms." Liam answered. "Do you want to do that?"

"BYE!" I shouted running towards the living room.






Ding Dong Dang...



"I'M COMING!" I shouted as I ran from my bedroom tying up my converse, whilst running down the stairs.


Ding Dong Dang...


"I SAID I WAS COMING!" I shouted again in front of the door. I opened the door with a huge smile just to see Eleanor, Danielle and Perry standing there. My smile instantly faded.

"Not happy to see us?" Dani asked as they stepped inside.

"I am." I replied. "But I thought you were someone else."

"Oh." El sang. "Is this the boy you've been hanging with the whole week?"

"Yes." I grinned. 

"Is he cute?" Perry asked and I nodded with a smirk.

"Is he your boyfriend yet?" El asked and in that same moment Louis joined us.

"Max can't have a boyfriend until she is 24." Louis said and I rolled my eyes at him.

"To answer your question El." I started. "He is not my boyfriend."

"Aww too bad." El said gaining a glare from Louis. "Oh come on Lou." She added pecking his lips.

"Eww!" I said and walked over to the kitchen finding Harry and Niall fighting.

"You can't eat!" Harry shouted to Niall.

"But I am starving!" Niall shouted.

"You're always hungry Niall." I said as I stood there.

"No I am not." Niall attacked.

"Yes you are!" I shouted sticking my tongue out at him.

"Oh it's on." Niall said and I let out a scream and started running.

"HELP ME!" I shouted and laughed as I ran away from Niall.



*Mikes' P.O.V.*


I was nervous, I know I shouldn't be, but I still am. I mean, I am about to meet the family of the girl I'm falling in love with. Max Tomlinson. 


I don't know how One Direction will act, I have no idea what to expect and I am nervous of what they think about me...


I was approaching to the door, when I heard laughter and shouting coming from the house, I guess that they are a normal family after all...


"NIALL I SWEAR TO GOD I AM GOING TO PEE IF YOU DON'T STOP!" I heard Max shout between laughter. 

"NIALL STOP BOTHERING MAX!" Someone shouted. 

"We're not over!" I heard an irish voice, assuming Niall, said.


I walked over to the door and rang the door bell.


"I'M COMING!" Max shouted. "PLEASE BEHAVE!" 


I waited for her to open the door. And as soon as she did, she took my breath away. She w¡is perfect.


"Hey there Mike." Max said with a smile.

"Hey Max." I replied.

"Come on in!" She exclaimed pulling me inside. "I swear they don't bite."

I laughed at her comment and someone came to the scene.

"Louis." Max said. "I present you Mike. Mike, Louis my adoptive father."

"Hello sir." I said shaking his hand.

"Sir?" Louis laughed. "Please call me Louis."

"Thank the lord you arrived." Niall said as he joined us. "Now I can eat!" 


And just by that comment, I knew this meeting was going to be a memorable one.

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