New Boy In Town

"Hi my name is LuLu Ryan and you are?"
"Marcel Styles", Marcel Styles was a new boy in town, but he was now the biggest nerd in the school, he gets book drop, punch and kicked in the stomach, his life is living in hell, he have to move again, and into a new school, he always get bullied and push around. He doesn't understand why people have to be so cruel, and bitchy, then there was LuLu, the girl who save his life from bullying. LuLu decided to help him, and maybe change him into a different kind if person.

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15. Important To read (NCA)

Okay I added the same thing about this on my Teenager Spirits, so basically I want your opinion on this cause I read so many Marcel stories and they seem pretty good, and I read mine and it seem like ugh! So I want you opinion on this story just comment in the box by

G= it's good keep going I love it

W= well it's really good but need to work on it more to make it interesting 

B= it's bad you should stop making chapters I give it a thumbs down,

 

now just rate those I the comment box, I need your honest opinion no lies if none of these are not one of your honest opinion then comment your different opinion in the comments, and I will read to see if I should stop or keep going please keep it nice and sweet. thanks. And NCA stands for Not a Chapter. 

 

~Hallie 

 

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