All Your Little Things (Louis Tomlinson&Eleanor Calder)

One Direction are performing in Manchester! And guess what?! Eleanor is there to show her support! What happens when Louis stops the whole concert just to ask Eleanor a huge question? What will her answer be?
Not sure if I should continue this or keep it the way it is, short and sweet. Please comment and tell me what I should do and if you like it!
(THIS IS MY FIRST ONE DIRECTION FAN FICTION, PLEASE GO EASY ON ME! <3)

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1. I Love You

All Your Little Things
(Louis' POV)
"...Cause' no one ever looks so good in a dress,
And it hurts cause' I know you wont be mine tonight,
No one ever makes me feel like you do,
When you smile baby tell me how to make it right!
Now all of my friends say, its not really worth it,
But even if that's true...
Nobody compares to you!"


The whole arena erupted in cheers and screams as we finished the fifth song of the night. Thousands of girls where cheering our names as we stood on the stage.


The only girl I was seeing though was my beautiful girlfriend Eleanor. In the front row with her family, standing up and clapping. We were doing a Manchester concert tonight, so Eleanor was able to come to the M.E.N Arena to watch me and the boys perform. She always says how much of a rush she gets when she sees me singing on stage, how proud she is of me. 


She rarely ever comes to see me in concert, mostly because I'm always on tour travelling the world but she always has university which she takes seriously, so she has loads of work to do. But tonight she was able to come, and I'm going to make it a night to remember.


'You guys ready?!' Harry shouts down his microphone, getting ready for the next song.
'Wait!' I shout, stopping Harry before he could say anything else. 'Could I just... say something a sec?' 
Harry looks at me in confusion for a second, but he shrugs and joins the three other confused boys at the right of the stage. 


I walk over to the part of the stage right above where Eleanor was sitting. I look down at her and give her the biggest grin possible, which makes her giggle but I could tell she was puzzled at what I was doing.


'Sorry for stopping, guys.' I say nervously as the cheers continued from the thousands of people in front of me. 'Can I just do something, real quick?'
The cheers and screams got louder, which I took as a 'yes'. I smiled to myself and jumped down of the stage and walked to the barriers that separated the insane fans from the performers. I reached my hand out towards Eleanor, who gave me a scared and worried look, but took it anyway. 


I pulled her under the barriers, dodging fans grabby hands, and led us both back onto the stage. I looked at my four band mates who were looking at me and giving me the 'what the hell are you doing' gesture. I sarcastically waved at them before turning my back so I was facing Eleanor.


'Lou... What are you doing?' Eleanor gave out a shaky laugh as I held onto her hand. 
'El...' I say softly into the microphones. Screams got even louder. I laughed as I watched the screaming girls below me reaching up, trying to get my attention. 'El, you know I love you, right?' 
Eleanor stared at me for a few seconds with anime wide eyes before nodding slowly. I swallowed a dry lump in my throat before continuing. 'And you love me, right?' 
'Of course I do.' Eleanor gleamed her beautiful smile at me, which made my knees weak everytime I saw it. 
'And we've been together for years now... we're not kids anymore...' From the look on Eleanor's face, it looked like she thought I was going to finish her there and then, infront of thousands of girls who half of them were probably recording this. But I would never do that, I love this girl too much.
'Despite the twitter hate, and the whole 'I ship this, I ship that' business... nothing can come between us, yeah?' She nods. 


I bite my lip. This is the moment. This is the moment that my whole life could change forever. My life could get better, stronger, clearer. I just hope...
'So I talked to your dad yesterday...' I spoke into the microphone. Fans screamed all around me so I could barely hear myself. 'He gave me permission to do this...'


This was the moment...


I got down on one knee, infront of thousands of people, thousands of video recordings, thousands of pictures... all for the one girl that I love with all my heart. 


Eleanor smacked her free hand over her mouth as she looked down at me, shaking her head with tears gleaming in her eyes.


'Eleanor...' I say but stop because everybody around us were screaming.
'IF YOU LOVE HIM YOU'D BE QUIET!' Harry shouts through his microphone. Everybody shut up. 
I turned around to Harry and laughed at his facial expression. He looked a bit too pleased with himself. I turned back around to Eleanor who now had tears streaming down her cheeks.


'Eleanor, I love you so..so much. I don't think I have ever loved a girl this much in my life before. When I was little, my dad told me that one day, I would find my princess and make her my queen. And now... I think I've found my princess...'


Eleanor's face grew red as people around us said their 'aw's'. I squeezed her hand gently as she wiped her eyes dry, although tears still wouldn't stop falling.


'Eleanor Jane Calder, would you please become my queen and marry me?' 
It was then surprisingly quiet. Everybody was waiting to hear what Eleanor had to say. 


My body was shaking all over. I felt completely sick with fear. What if she says no? How much of a dickhead would I look then? How much of a complete saddo would I look? But she said she loved me so... but what if she was lying. What if she was making it up for the camera's. What if she was just saying it to-
'Yes.' I hear her voice say, which nudged me straight out of my thoughts. The whole place erupted with cheers and screams and claps. I stood up quickly and rummaged through my back pocket to come up with a shiny diamond ring. It was my grandmothers, so I didn't have a box for it and I didn't have enough time to get one.


I slid it slowly onto Eleanor's finger, hearing her gasp as she saw it. I looked up at her face to see her crying more than before. I instantly threw my arms around her and held her tightly before kissing her passionately. I didn't care if there were thousands of people watching. I loved her and would do anything for her.


I held her hand and kissed her cheek before walking over to where the boys were, hand in hand.
As soon as I got to my band mates, they all ran up to me and tackled me to the floor in a second. Every one of the boys were punching me playfully. I was laughing so much I couldn't get up of the floor! This is why I love having these guys around me, they know how to make everything a laugh.
After they all got of me and I recovered I stood up and shook myself off. 


'My Louis all grown up!' Zayn says as he ruffles my hair and pats my back. I shrug him off and punch him in the arm playfully. That got me more punches.
Eleanor got her fair share of hugs and kisses on the cheeks too. Why didn't I get that? All I got was a rugby tackle to the floor and punches to my whole upper area. 


After the congratulations were finished, it was about time we got on with the show seen as though the screaming fans were getting a tad bit impatient by now. I whispered in each other boys ears, telling them which song I wanted to sing next. 


I led Eleanor over to the part of the stage where the glass stairs were. I sat down on the second step up and sat Eleanor on my knee. Her arms wrapped around my neck. She wasn't crying any more, but she was shaking like crazy. 


'So you guys ready now?' Harry shouts through the microphone. Fans screamed all around us as they jumped up and down. I kissed Eleanor one last time before I had to start singing.


"You're hand fits in mine like its made just for me,
But bare this in mind it was, mean't to be,
And I'm joining up the dots with the freckles on your cheeks,
And it all makes sense to me.


I know you've never loved, the crinkles by your eyes when you smile,
You've never loved your stomach or your thighs,
The dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine,
But I'll love them endlessly.


I wont let these little things slip out of my mouth,
But if I do, Its you, oh its you they add up to,
I'm in love with you,
And all these little things.


You cant go to bed, without a cup of tea,
Maybe that's the reason that you talk in your sleep,
And all those conversations are the secrets that I keep,
Though it makes no sense to me.


I know you've never loved the sound of your voice on tape,
You never want to know how much you weigh,
You still have to squeeze into your jeans,
But you're perfect to me.


I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth,
But if it's true,
It's you, It's you they add up to,
I'm in love with you,
And all these little things.


You'll never love yourself half as much as I love you,
And you'll never treat yourself right, darling, but I want you to.
If I let you know I'm here for you
Maybe you'll love yourself like I love you, oh.


And I've just let these little things slip out of my mouth,
'Cause it's you, Oh, it's you,
It's you they add up to,
And I'm in love with you,
And all these little things.


I won't let these little things slip out of my mouth,
But if it's true,
It's you, It's you they add up to,
I'm in love with you,
And all your little things"

 

 

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