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9. How to save a life By: IsAngieTheWriter

 

Angie, your story needs little work, but there was a few things I might point out. Try to use quotation marks "hello" instead of -hello- 

 

Advise: Try to make readers want to continue reading, or use hookers/grabbers. Eg:

Zayn didnt know i was dating Harry. "Hello, I am Zayn and I will be your waiter this evening" - No sound by Macy brooks. 

 

Feedback: The story is good, but it isn't my type of book. If you like storys based on songs, then this is for you.

 

Rate: 3 1/2 (over average)

 

-India

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