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14. Hannelore By: The Fuzz

 

Fuzz, Your story is  and brings fantastic readers closer, making them hang off their seats. 

 

"The soles of my shoes slapped against the bare wood floors as I weaved between the lines of garment boxes tables and girls gazing at me with sad, pitiful eyes." With each sentence, I can visualise more and more of what the characters, their personality, and the places. As each word enters my brain I feel as if it was a movie. I have no advise for you.

 

Advise: Update more frequently, and dont lose the quality of your writing.

 

Feedback: If your movellas was a book, it would be a sublime delicacy. (Amazing dish.)

 

Rate: 5/5

 

-India (:

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