The death of Eliza Swift

For the song comp based on how to save a life. This is about how Eliza swift ends up dying. Hopefully in under 3000 words!


5. chapter 5

On the paper I wrote

Dear police

I hope you can read English. The person who as such killed me, did not do so of their own free will. They were blackmailed into doing so, and if you do work out who did, I expressly wish for him not to be jailed, or hurt/killed for any reason. Check the most popular peoples phones at my school, try the deleted messages. You will find the person. Lock her up.

Eliza Swift


In Japanese I wrote a quick note to Robby.

Sorry, and stay strong. I love you.

I turned to look at Robby and removed the knife from his hands. He was shaking all over, and I could tell he was scared out of his wits. I felt like I was doing a deal with the devil. Well in a way I was, but I was getting rid of the devil in the process. I moved in closer and put my arm round him, comforting him. He looked up into my eyes, unaware that just below the knife was pointing at my heart and jabbing into my skin. Then he did something I half expected. But half didn’t. He leaned in and kissed me. And I died. 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