A Cinderfella Story

hey guys. this story was for my english assignment so i hope you like it.


1. chapter 1

It was the first day of the new term at Doncaster Road High School. Louis Stack was in his room getting ready for school. He hated school, but it was better than staying at home with his stepdad and two stepbrothers.


When Louis was little his real Dad died and 6 months later his Mum remarried Po Stack. Po already had two sons: they were good looking, but they had hearts of stone. They hated Louis and to be honest he hated them. They made him do everything for them: make them breakfast, do their washing, do their homework. Po didn’t like Louis. He favoured his two sons Kyle and Mikey. Two years after marrying Po, Louis's mum Maggie died leaving Louis with his stepdad and stepbrothers. Po made Louis work at his sandwich shop, Po's Paninis. Louis didn't mind working at the sandwich shop as he got to work with his best mate Eddie.


Anyway as Louis headed towards the door, he heard one of his brothers call his name. Louis quickly ran out of the door not wanting to do his brother's chores and ran down to Eddie's house.

“Alright mate?” asked Eddie as he answered the door

“Yeah you ready,” Louis replied

“Yep, all the hot babes in sixth form here we come,” replied Eddie

“Gosh Eddie, trust you,” laughed Louis. “come on or we're going to be late,”

When they finally arrived at school they were late so they hurried along to registration.

“Tomlinson, Jones, your late,” barked Mr Johnson

“Fashionably so sir, fashionably so,” replied Eddie

“Just sit down and be quiet,” snapped Mr Johnson “Louis your in the corner next to Harriet and Eddie your sitting at the front right where I can see you,”

“Lucky me sir,” replied Eddie and sat down. Louis sat down next to Harriet.

“Hi,” she said to him.

“Hi,”he replied back. He thought to himself “Lucky me, next to little miss popular,”


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