REVISING AND EDITING Werewolves Aren't Real...Duh (1st book of the Brotherly Rivals series)

Hi. My name is Rain. I know... weird name right? Well, that's my name. Another interesting fact about me is that I'm an orphan. My parents got killed by a mugger when I was 2. I don't remember much about them, but I do remember my sister. She gave me to the orphanage after mom and dad died. She's probably dead. Also, I'm a cutter. I don't particularly enjoy it, but it makes me feel like... I have control. I don't have control at the orphanage. I'm just one of the 50 kids who have to live in this place. They don't give a damn about any of us. I'm turning 15 tomorrow, but they don't care. So I'm running away.
*That's what Rain thought. Little did she know her life was about to change forever.


1. The Wolf


Rain's p.o.v.

Today's my birthday. Whoop dee-fucking-doo. I just finished packing my stuff. I don't have a lot, so it didn't take long. I left a note that read

'I'm gone, and the only reason you even got this was because I wasn't doing your laundry and you came to punish me. The only reason you might miss me is because I'm the one who feeds you when you're feeling lazy (all the time.) I'm tired of being treated like a slave. So...yea, bye bitch.'

The only other thing that was left of me was the swichblade I use to cut myself.




   I spent almost hours putting distance between me and the orphanage. If they found me, I knew they'd kill me since I took all the food. I was eating some chicken (I love meat) when I weird smell drifted to my nose. I kept walking figuring it was just a smell (I have a better sense of smell than anyone I know.) All of a sudden three huge wolves jumped out of the bushes. They started circling me. The wolf that caught my attention was the biggest one. A white wolf with black paws and (I kid you not) black eyes. He was breathtaking. Then suddenly, he lunged.


 Unknown p.o.v.

I heard rustling and instantly phased. (My 3rd time phasing, by the way.) My two packmates heard it too and both phased. We followed the rustling and smelt chicken.

'It's a person,' I said through my mind link.

'We know,' Jake and Jakayla said at the same time. At that exact moment, though, I smelt the most amazing smell. It was vanilla with a hint of mint.

'Mate!' My wolf cried out in joy.

 I burst out of the trees with the others close on my heels. There she was. She was perfect. She had waist lenth red hair and the most beautiful eyes. They were a light blue, almost grayish kind of color. Without thinking I threw myself at her. She put up a struggle but hit her head on a rock and fainted. I howled with rage seeing her lying there unconscious, obviously in pain.

'You want me to end it. I mean, she is a girl' Jakayla said.

'Touch her and I'll rip you to peices!' I growled back.

'Okay okay, touchy' she said. I didn't care, by that time I'd already put her on my back and was running toward the pack house, careful not to drop her.


Rain p.o.v.

I woke up in a strange room with a strange girl standing over me. She had hot pink hair. Her eyes were purple and she was wearing a plain green dress.

"YOU'RE AWAKE!!!" She screeched at the top of her lungs.

"Yea, and you're annoying," I said trying to sit up, but failing.

"You can't get up yet, you had a cracked skull. I mended it , of course. But you still might be sore. I paralyzed you from the waist down so you wouldn't kick me in the face when I was mending you. You're a fighter, you know that? I'll go tell him you're awake so he'll get off my ca-"

"Who's 'him'?" I asked, cutting her off.

"Me," said a guy who'd just walked into the room.


  He was soooooo sexy. He had sorta spiky black hair and the greenest eyes I'd ever seen. He also smelt really really good, kinda earthy. He gave me a look that I'd never gotten at the orphanage. It was compassion.... it was love.

"Who are you?" I whispered.

"I'm sorry,"he said.

"Huh," okaaaaaay now I'm confused.

"I'm sorry about you getting hurt and hitting your head and-"

"It's fine," I said, "once again, who are you?"

"Rider," He replied, and somehow I knew it was perfect for him.

"And you are..." he said, trailing off.

"Rain..... I know, I know, weird name,"

"It's beautiful," he breathed, staring right into my eyes.

"Well I guess I'll be going then," I barely realized 'pink hair' was still there,

"My name's Ella, call me if you need me," With that she left. Rider sat down next to me on the bed.

"What pack are you from?" The question surprised me. It also confused me.

"What are you talking about???" I asked slowly.

"Your pack? 'Cause you're a werewolf. You seem like you have alpha blood to me,"

 Okaaaaaay, so he's crazy.Werewolves aren't real...duh, but apparently he believes that he's one, and I am too. I've heard worse.

"What the he-"

"ATTACK! ATTACK! " A guy with white hair burst into the room, shouting like he was mad. Probably was for all I know.

"Hey there, beautiful," He said, winking at me

Rider growled. Growled??

"Rider, hurry up! We need you outside! NOW!" He said, completely ignoring the sound Rider just made.


Rider's p.o. v.

 REALLY! NOW OF ALL FREAKIN TIMES! I looked down at my mate. She didn't seem scared at all. She just looked confused, like we were all mental or something.

"You stay here and don't move," I commanded in my alpha voice.

  Surprisingly, she didn't cringe. Well, I was right about her being of alpha bloodline.

"Sure, okay, but why?" she asked

  Okay, she obviously doesn't know about werewolves. That's a problem. I'll explain later.

"I've gotta go do something," I said.

"Alright, but can you at least help me sit up?" she said tiredly.

  She seemed interested, but didn't ask questions. Suspicious, and all the more sexy. She held up her arms expectantly.

"Yea," I said.

 I lifted her gently, and sparks shot through my arms from where we were touching. I could tell she felt it too, because she shivered and sighed, melting into me. I carried her over to the chair by the window. She'd be able to see everything from here. I made sure she was comfortable, then ran outside.


 Rain p.o.v

 Wow. I love him already. Wait...what am I thinking? I don't love him, I don't even know him. The only reason we met was because he found me in the forest. That's all. He doesn't feel anything towards me in that way, he just feels sorry for me.

   But when he lifted me...I don't know, I just wanted to stay there, in his arms....forever. A commotion from the front yard roused me out of my thoughts. I looked out the window and saw the white haired kid, Ella, Rider and like, 30 other people run out into the yard. Just then over 20 wolves burst into the clearing. What is up with this place and wolves?

   I saw everyone who came out of the house.............shifting. OK, WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH THESE PEOPLE!!! I saw Rider change into......... the white and black wolf from earlier. Just as the...........werewolves launched themselves at each other, I let out a scream that stopped them all in their tracks.


Rider's p.o.v.

 I just heard Rain scream. My Rain. I instantly phased back and ran toward the house, throwing on my jeans on the way.

 I burst into the room to see her out of the chair and in a corner. I approached her slowly, knowing what she just saw would change her life as she knew it. When I got close enough, I held out my hand.

   Instead of taking it, she drew a shard of glass out of her pocket. She looked me dead in the eyes, put the glass to her flesh, and whispered one word, a word that made me shiver when she said it.

"Control," she said.

 With that, she ripped the glass across her arm. I stood there, paralyzed, not really grasping what she was doing until she squeaked in pain. I ran over to her, and pulled her up.

"WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING! ARE YOU INSANE?!?!?" I practically snarled at her. She whimpered, blood still oozing from her wound.

"I'm sorry for yelling, but please, please, please, please, PLEASE don't ever do that again. I can't bear to see you hurt yourself," I pleaded.

 I got the first aid kit, sat her on my lap, and started cleaning her arm. As I was cleaning it, I noticed she had scars up and down her arms. She's a cutter. Crap. She looked at me with a hard glint in her eyes.

"Why do you care?" She hissed.

"Because.... you're my mate, and even if you never love me, since this is all new to you, I'll always love you," Her eyes softened and she gently touched my face.

 I leaned forward and kissed her, softly at first, then hard. She was surprised, but then she started kissing back. She wrapped her arms around my neck, pulling me to her.

  I licked her bottom lip and she opened her mouth immediately. I was just about to try and mate with her, if you know what I mean ;), when stupid Jakayla decides to barge in. Rain pulled back quick and leaped away from me with amazing speed.

"Hey, that pack in there-woah didn't mean to interrupt." She looked at me with her eyebrows raised.

"You weren't interrupting anything," Rain raged.

"What is it?" I asked. Jakayla looked at me, then messaged me.

'Fiery, isn't she. You should've just let me kill her when she was knockd out.'

"WHAT DO YOU WANT JAKAYLA!?!?!?!?" I yelled, getting agitated now.

"Just bring her down stairs."


Rain's p.o.v.

 It's a good thing this 'Jakayla' person barged in when she did. Rider... Rider is soooooo hot. He walked over to me and lifted me quickly, making me giggle.

"Did you just giggle?" Rider looked at me with an amused, loving look in his eyes.

"You just GIGGLED! That is adorable," He nuzzled my neck, causing me to giggle again.

"Hello, there are people waiting for 'her highness' downstairs," Jakayla said snarkily.

"'Her highness' has a name. It's Rain," With that, I jumped out of Rider's arms and walked out of the room. As I was walked out, I heard questions like,

'has anyone ever, EVER, got up from Ella's paralyzing curse that quickly?' And responses like

'I don't know, but she could be best friend material'.

  I smiled at that. When I got downstairs, I saw someone I never thought I'd see again.


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