REVISING AND EDITING Werewolves Aren't Real...Duh (1st book of the Brotherly Rivals series)

Hi. My name is Rain. I know... weird name right? Well, that's my name. Another interesting fact about me is that I'm an orphan. My parents got killed by a mugger when I was 2. I don't remember much about them, but I do remember my sister. She gave me to the orphanage after mom and dad died. She's probably dead. Also, I'm a cutter. I don't particularly enjoy it, but it makes me feel like... I have control. I don't have control at the orphanage. I'm just one of the 50 kids who have to live in this place. They don't give a damn about any of us. I'm turning 15 tomorrow, but they don't care. So I'm running away.
*That's what Rain thought. Little did she know her life was about to change forever.

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17. The End?

Angel's p.o.v.

I woke up wearing Rider's shirt from yesterday. It took me a while to remember what happened, and when I did, I sighed happily. I got up, did my morning routine, putting on ripped jeans and a spongebob tee after taking a shower, putting my hair back with a headband and going into the kitchen. "Well, geez. You and Rider must have had a really good night. You reek of him. Don't even try to deny it, I clearly see his mark on your neck." Jake said, walking in the kitchen and thumping my forehead. I blushed deeply and put my head down. "At least his hormones won't be going crazy." Lauren said, handing me two plates with pancakes, bacon, and eggs on them. "Thank you." I said, taking the plates and heading back to the room. When I walked in, Rider was still passed out on the bed. "Rider, breakfast." I said, trying to wake him up. He didn't budge. I set the breakfast down and walked over to him. "Come on, Rider. Get up." I whined, shaking him. Then, I decided to try something different. I leaned down and kissed him gently. I knew he had woken up because I could feel his lips form a smile. "Morning, sleeping beauty." I said, standing back up. "Why did you wake me up so early?" He groaned, taking my pillow and putting it over his face. "It's not early! It's almost noon! It's your fault for staying up so late!" I exclaimed. "If I had went to sleep, you wouldn't have my mark on your neck, would you?" He mumbled into the pillow. I giggled and snatched the pillow away from him. "The light, it burns!" He shouted over dramatically, shielding his eyes. "Get up and stop being lazy!" I said, hitting him with the pillow. "Fine." He agreed, sitting up. "Now, you get breakfast." I decided, getting his plate and handing it to him. "FOOD!" He shouted loudly, grabbing the plate and immediately grabbing a piece of bacon. "Rider. What was that whole 'mind reading' thing yesterday?" I asked him. "It's a way we can communicate without talking, like when we're wolves, but we can do it anytime. Since we're mates, we have a special, more private mind link. That's why we can feel each other's emotions. There's also the pack link, which now, you are officially a part of. We can send mind messages to anyone in the pack, but anyone else in the pack can listen in if they want to." He explained, a mouth full of pancake. "That. Is. Gross. Don't talk with your mouth full." I said after I had finished my food. 'Better?' I heard the message as clear as day in my mind. 'Much better.' I "said" back.

    "Open the door!" Malcolm whispered loudly about an hour later, right after Rider had decided to get dressed. "Don't you know how to knock?" I complained, opening the door. He was holding a sleeping baby boy with curly brown hair. "Shhhhh!" He shushed me. A little girl with brown hair and hazel eyes peeked out from behind Malcolm. "ANNA!" Rider shouted, holding out his arms. "RIDE!" The little girl screeched, running and jumping on Rider. The baby boy stirred before waking up. "What part of 'shhhh!' don't you understand!" Malcolm hissed, sitting the boy on the bed. "Who are you?" He asked, staring at me with his big dark brown eyes. "I'm Rain." I said, smiling slightly. "You're Ride's girlfriend?!?!" The girl shrieked. "Yes she is, Anna." Rider said, looking at me. "You're pretty. Why do you like Ride?" The little boy asked, staring at me. "Cause I'm awesome, Alex." Rider said playfully. "Your dad needs to talk to you, Rider." Malcolm informed us, taking Anna and Alex's hands. "Ok." Rider said, jumping up and grabbing my hand. He rushed out of the room with me trailing behind him. When we got to the main living room, I saw Rider's parents sitting down. Rider's dad motioned for us to sit in front of him. "No use beating around the bush." He sighed once we had sat down. "Rain, I think  you're a wonderful girl, and the best one for our son. But I'm afraid it's too dangerous keeping you here. We found two of our packmates dead today from just trying to hunt. I'm sorry, but you have to go." He said slowly.

  Rider's p.o.v.

WHAT THE HECK!?!? How could  he just flat out kick her out? I was about to protest when I felt her hand slip from mine. "Thank you." She said, standing up. "Rider, thank you for caring about me. The nightmare I had was about you being killed. When I woke up, I was about to take my own life, figuring that if I went away, everything would go back to normal. So thank you for saving my life, and I'm sorry it was in vain." She whispered. She lightly kissed my cheek before going back down the hallway. Of course, I rushed after her. She was in the room packing, tears streaming down her face when I came in. "I'm not letting you go anywhere." I stated, hot tears stinging in my eyes. "Yes you are. I can't watch you get hurt. I'll just give Leon what he wants." She said quietly. "You're not leaving me!" I growled, the tears finally falling. "I'm so sorry, Rider. I have to. It's the only way." She said, a sob escaping. She finished packing her bag and picked it up. She walked out of the room and I followed her, all the way to the staircase that led to the tree we entered to get here. She gave me a soft kiss before whispering, "Goodbye, I love you." I watched as Rain walked up the stairs. I watched as my mate slipped away, along with my heart.

End of Book 1

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