THE CONCERT

this is about 3 girls who love one direction and one day they go to a concert and something unexpected happens ...... (ps this is my first so pls dont juge but i hope you like it )

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6. THE SURPRISE

LOUIS P.O.V 

I WOKE UP ABBY WAS IN MY ARMS SHE HAD HER HEAD AGIANST MY CHEST SHE LOOKED SO PEACEFUL I DIDNT WANT TO WAKE HER BUT ME AND THE LADS HAD TO GET READY FOR THE CONCERT I KINDA TAPPED HER ON HER SHOULDER TO SEE IF SHE WOULD WAKE UP WHEN MADDIE WHISPERED "THATS NOT GOING TO WORK SHES A ROUGH SLEEPER SHE COULD SLEEP THROUGH A WHOLE BUNCH OF PEOPLE SCREAMING" SHE SAID WHILE LAUGHING WITH NIALL "WELL HOW DO I WAKE HER UP" I ASKED CONFUSED "YOU SMACK HER WITH THE PILLOW" MADDIE SAID "I CANT DO THAT DO HER"SHE LOOKED AT ME WITH A EVIL SMIRK "I CAN!!!!" MADDIE SCREAMED SHE GRABBED HER PILLOW AND HIT ABBY WITH IT AS HARD AS SHE COULD "OWWWWWWW IM UP IM UP GOSH MADDIE WHEN I SAID HIT ME WITH A PILLOW TO WAKE ME UP I MEANT SOFTLY"SHE SCREAMED AT MADDIE "SORRY" MADDIE SAID LAUGHING "ITS FINE MADDIE JUST DONT DO IT AGIAN" ABBY SAID "OK" MADDIE SAID SMIRKING .

NIALLS P.O.V 

I WOKE UP TO MADDIE TALKING TO LOUIS THEN SHE GOT UP AND SMACKED ABBY WITH A PILLOW I STARTED TO LAUGH ABBY SCREAMED AT HER BUT MADDIE COULDNT HELP BUT LAUGH HER FACE TURNED RED WHILE TRYING TO BREATH I ENDED UP LAUGHING WITH HER AND ABBY WAS JUST SMILING AT US CAUSE WE COULDNT STOP LAUGHING IT WAS A FUNNY MORNING MADDIE GOT OUT OF BED AND WALKED INTO THE KITCHEN SHE GAVE ME THIS LOOK AND SAID "WHERE IS THE FOOD" SHE ASKED I LOOKED AT HER AND JUST SMILED "MADDIE THE FOOD IS IN THE OTHER CABNET" SHE LOOKED AT ME AND SMILED "OH,SORRY IM NOT USE TO THIS PLACE" SHE SAID WHILE TRYING TO HOLD BACK A LAUGH SHE IS SO CUTE AND I DONT THINK SHE KNOWS IT "MADDIE YOUR SO BEAUTIFUL" I SAID SHE LOOKED AT ME AND SMILED "I KNOW I AM" WE STARTED LAUGHING AND TURNED ON THE RADIO AND STARTED TO DANCE VERY WEIRD WE KEEP LAUGHING IT WAS SUPER FUN AND I LOVE HER 

ABBYS P.O.V 

I LAUGHED AS I HEARD MUSIC BLARING IN THE KITCHEN ALL OF A SUDDEN TAYLOR SWIFT CAME ON AND MADDIE SCREAMED WE RAN INTO THE KITCHEN AND MADDIE WAS ON THE GROUND CRYING SCREAMING" I HATE TAYLOR LET HER DIE LET HER DIE " WE ALL WERE LAUGHING MADDIE IS CRAZY EVER SINCE TAYLOR AND HARRY BROKE UP SHE HAS HATED TAYLOR I DONT KNOW BUT SHE DOES NOT LIKE HER LOUIS CAME OUT FROM THE DRESSING ROOM ALL READY FOR THE CONCERT AND THE OTHER LADS WERE READY TO BUT NIALL WAS STILL IN HIS PJS LAUGHING LOUIS TOLD HIM TO GO GET READY SO NIALL LEFT AND GOT CHANGED ME AND MADDIE WENT INTO ELENORS CLOSET AND WE PICKED OUT SOME CUTE OUTFITS "WHILE WE ARE AT THE CONCERT YOU AND MADDIE SHOULD GO SHOPPING" LOUIS SAID WHILE HOLDING MY HAND "REALLY YAY!!!!!" I THANKED LOUIS AND HE HUGGED ME 

MADDIES P.O.V 

NIALL AND LOUIS CAME OVER TO ME AND ABBY AND YELLED "SURPRISE" ME AND ABBY KINDA JUST LOOKED AROUND AND THEN NIALL SAID WE WANT TO ASK YOU OUT ON A DATE AFTER THE CONCERT WE SAID YES AND HEADED DOWN TO THE CONCERT WITH THE BOYS WE WERE LEAVING TO GO TO THE MALL AND WE GAVE LOUIS AND NIALL KISSES GOODBYE WE HAD TO BE BACK IN 3 HOURS SO WE HAD A WHILE TO SHOP

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