THE CONCERT

this is about 3 girls who love one direction and one day they go to a concert and something unexpected happens ...... (ps this is my first so pls dont juge but i hope you like it )

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4. I CANT BELIVE IT

NIALLS P.O.V 

YES SHE SAID YES THE GIRL OF MY DREAMS SAID YES IM SOOOO HAPPY ACT COOL NIALL BREATH "HEY MADDIE COME HERE" I SAID SHE RAN OVER FROM WHERE SHE WAS WITH ABBY ON THE PHONE I PATTED THE SPOT NEXT TO ME SHE PLOPED DOWN NEXT TO ME SMILING "SUP' SHE SAID "UMM DO YOU GUYS WANT TO COME WITH US ON THE REST OF THE TOUR AND MAYBE JUST STAY WITH US?" I ASKED WHILE HOLDING MY BREATH HOPING SHE WOULDNT HAVE TO LEAVE ME SHE GOT UP "EXCUSE ME " SHE SAID.I KNEW IT SHE CANT COME SHE WENT OVER TO ABBY AND ASKED HER SOMETHING THEY LOOKED LIKE THEY WERE FIGURING OUT SOMETHING FINALLY MADDIES FACE WAS LITE UP WITH HER SMILE SHE RAN OVER TO ME AND SAID "OF COURSE WE WILL STAY WITH YOU!!!!" SHE SCREAMED WHILE HUGGING ME "YES!!" I SAID I WAS SO HAPPY MY PRINCESS WAS GOING TO BE THERE ME WITH ME EVERY MINUTE. MADDIE KISSED ME ON THE CHEECK I BLUSHED SHE SMILED AND WALKED OVER TO ABBY I PULLED OUT MY PHONE TO SEE THAT AMY HAD TXTED  ME 42 TIMES I TXTED HER BACK SAYING SORRY BUT I HAVE MOVED ON I FOUND SOMEONE THAT LIKES ME FOR ME NOT WHAT I AM I SHUT MY PHONE AND LOOKED AT MADDIE AND SMILED

ABBYS P.O.V 

MADDIE CAME OVER TO ME AND ASKED IF WE COULS STAY WITH THE BOYS CONSIDERING SHE WAS ONLY 16 I TOLD HER I DONT THINK SO WHAT ABOUT YOUR FAMILY SHE GAVE ME THIS LOOK AND I GAVE IN MY PLAN WAS SINCE IM 18 I CAN MOVE OUT AND MOVE IN WITH THE BOYS AND MADDIE CAN JUST COME WITH ME WE THOUGHT THAT SOUNDED GOOD SO WE WENT WITH THAT WHILE MADDIE WENT OVER TO NIALL TO TELL HIM THE GOOD NEWS I CALLED MY MOM SHE SAID THAT WAS FINE AND THAT SHE WOULD MISS ME THEN I CALLED MADDIES MOM HER MOM WAS A LITTLE CONCERED BUT AFTER I TOLD HER SHE WOULD BE WITH ME HER MOM SAID YES I WAS SO HAPPY THEN I GOT A TEXT FROM LILLIE SAYING THAT SHE WAS MOVING FROM THE UK TO AMERICA I BROKE DOWN IN TEARS MY BEST FRIEND IS MOVING AWAY FROM US MADDIE CAME OVER AND ASKED WHAT WAS WRONG BUT BEFORE I COULD TELL HER SHE SAID "IF LOUIS BROKE YOUR HEART I SWARE IM GOING TO BREAK HIS FACE" MADDIE SAID I SMILED A LITTLE "NO MADDIE THATS NOT WHY I DONT KNOW HOW TO TELL YOU THIS BUT LILLIE IS MOVING TO AMERICA FOR GOOD" MADDIE BROKE INTO TEARS AND RAN OVER TO NIALL SHE HUGGED HIM AND STARTED TO CRY INTO HIS SHOULDER HE ASKED WHAT WAS WRONG WHILE CUDDILING HER TO MAKE HER FEEL BETTER SHE WIPED AWAY HER TEARS AND TOLE HIM HE SAID HE WAS SORRY AND THAT IT WOULD BE OK BUT MADDIE WAS STILL UPSET I WAS STILL CRYING AND LOUIS OVERHEARD WHY WE WERE CRYING AND HE JUST HELD ME AND LET ME CRY AFTER I WAS DONE CRYING MY EYES OUT HARRY TOLD US WE HAD TO GO. LOUIS GRABBED MY HAND AND PULLED ME CLOSE WE WALKED OUT TO A BUNCH OF GIRLS SCREAMING AND CRYING MADDIE AND NIALL WERE BEHIND US MADDIE LOOKED TERRIFIED AND SHE LOOKED LIKE SHE WAS ABOUT THROW SOME BRICKS BUT SHE JUST CARRIED ON WE GOT INTO THE TOUR BUS WHEN MADDIE SCREAMED "YOUR CAR ABBY WHAT ABOUT YOUR CAR!!!" I FROZE "OMG I NEED TO GET MY CAR" LOUIS LOOKED AT ME" ITS OK PAUL IS DRIVING YOUR CAR HE WILL BE BEHIND US WE ARE GOING TO DONCASTER LONDON MY HOMETOWN" HE SAID "OH OK THANK YOU I KISSED HIM ON  THE CHEECK AND SAT DOWN MADDIE AND NIALL WERE TIRED SO THEY WENT TO BED THEY WERE SOOO CUTE TOGETHER AND THEY HAD TO SHARE HIS BED BUT MADDIE WAS OK WITH THAT.

LOUIS P.O.V 

THE GIRL OF MY DREAMS IS GOING TO BE LIVING WITH ME IM SO EXCITED I LOOKED AT ABBY AND SMILED SHE SMILED BACK AND BLUSHED "ARE YOU TIRED LOVE"I ASKED "A LITTLE" SHE SAID WHILE YAWNING "WELL I  AM  SO WE SHOULD GET TO BED FOLLOW ME" I TOLD HER WE GOT TO OUR BUNK AREAS WE SAW MADDIE AND NIALL SLEEPING THEY WERE ON THE TOP BUNK SO WE TOOK THE BOTTOM BUNK I GOT INTO THE BED AND ABBY CLIMED IN WITH ME I CUDDLES HER WITH ME AND SHE FELL ASLEEP SHE WAS VERY PRETTY WHEN SHE WAS SLEEPING I LOVE HER AND I ALWAYS WANT TO BE WITH HER SHE IS MINE AND I HOPE SHE FEELS THE SAME WAY I CANT WAIT TILL TOMORROW WE GET TO SPEND THE WHLE DAY TOGETHER !. I HEARD THE REST OF THE BOYS GET INTO THE BUNKS AND FALL ASLEEP HARRY STARTED SNORING AND I LAUGHED THEN FELL ASLEEP TO THE SOUND OF THE CARS ENGINE.

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