back for you (niall horan fan fic)

she was 13. he was 19. she loved him like millions of teen girls. he didnt know she existed. till one day.....

lily baton loved one direction. she went to a concert with her best friend daisy. when lily has a panic attack and passes out she gets the surprise of her life. waken up with 5 of the fittest boys on the planet around her. niall falls in love but he knows its wrong. a 6 year age gap was fine, but not when shes 13. niall promised her that when she was 16 he would find her.

3 years later on her birthday he does just that. but is niall too late?


46. chapter 45

louis p.o.v


"im such an idiot" i muttered whilst i sat in the living room

"no your not louis! dont beat yourself up about it. its not your fault. your dad will pull through. hes a strong man. he always has been" my mum replied pulling me in for a hug

"but it is my fault. if i'd let him stay even a minute longer hewould have avoided that car. if i wasn't such a selfish prat! god i hate myself!" i said. el came and sat next to me. she handed me lily. i sat there looking in my daughters eyes. there was so much i should have been doing today. so much that still needs to be done. i do love my dad. i dont kno if i could admit it to him but its true. i do love him. but eleanor comes first. i have a feeling that shes been waiting for this for way too long. i got out my phone and text my mate stan

to stan: still going ahead see you in 5

from stan: its all set up


"mu can you text me if anything happens. i need to go get something" i said

"sure baby!" she replied. i held eleanor by the arm and gently dragged her up

"come with me" I whispered and she nodded. I lead her out the hospital and into the car.

"put this on" I said handing her a blindfold. she did as she was told but I could see the confusion in her eyes. I drove until I reached our destination. I helped el out the car seeing as she still had her blindfold on

"can I look now?" she asked. I put my thumb up to stan who quickly walked off away from us.

"you may" I replied. she opened her eyes and took in the setting. we were in a garden. t was covered with sheets to make it look like night and fairy lights made the entire area glow. it was exactly like lily had described it to me all those years ago.

"lou, its beautiful but why are we here?" she asked

"because I want to make this a day you'll never forget" I replied I pulled out the box and got down on one knee

"Eleanor jane calder, will you marry me?" she looked stunned for a moment but then smiled

"I thought you'd never ask!" she replied and I smiled.

"well with everything that's going on I thought it would be best to wait. I mean I've had the ring about 5 years now. anyway you better sort all the girlie part of it out because the weddings in 2 weeks." I said

"2 weeks that's so soon lou"

"yes but we want to do it before your baby bump gets any bigger!"i replied and she smiled. then my phone went off

from mum xx: your fathers just woken up and wants to see you. apart from a broken leg and concussion hes fine. xx

to mum xx: tell him i'll be there asap


I turned to el

"well if we go back now everyone will still be there so we can tell them together!" I said and she nodded. we got in the car. whilst I drove I couldn't help but smile as she stared lovingly at her ring. as if by coincidence the radio started playing our old song last first kiss. I know its the song niall sung to lily when he proposed to her.

"lou" el said

"yes baby" I replied

"how did you know that I would like something like that. we've never talked about stuff like this"

"well when lily was staying with us the first time she cam with me to buy the ring and we were talking. she said how you would probably want something like this and she would want something big like the London eye. that's where niall got the idea from. I told him" I said. she smiled

"I cant believe how grown up lily is for her age. I mean she's not even 19 yet!" el replied

"I know its quite weird though" we pulled in to the hospital. we went straight to my dads room

"Louis!" he exclaimed whe he saw me

"dad" I replied and I saw a faint smile escape his lips.

"guys we have something to say" I said and everyone looked at us

"one eleanors pregnant and two we're engaged. the weddings in two weeks and everyones invited" I said and everyone smiled. my dad looked quite upset though. I think he assumed that he wasn't

"your invited to dad" I said and he smiled

"really lou?" he asked

"yep. im only ever gonna get married once so I might aswell invite you. besides it would be nice to rebuild a relationship. I mean your my mum and no matter wht you've done to me your still the only actual dad i'll have. marks amazing but he's not dad is he. no matter what you've done your still my dad and im still your son and as hard as it might be to admit I do love you" everyone awed at this comment. I felt myself go red but I ignored it. I gave my dad a massive hug instead

"so lets get these wedding plans started!" lily said making everyone laugh. I walked over to Eleanor and put my arms round her waist and resting them on he stomach. I place my head on her shoulder and she turned her head so we were face to face

"I love you baby" I said

"I love you too boo" she replied and we locked lips. it still felt like magic no matter how many times we did it. being together made every moment more wonderful and worth being in.

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