my new family~ COMPLETED

well, Eleanor Jones. was happy until her mum died of cancer and her Dad and Older brother got drunk every night. her other older brother left and she was left looking after her baby sister. her Dad and brother beat her every nigh and day. what happens when she has enough and ends up being reunited with her brother who left her and also happens to be in the biggest boy band in the world. (soz its crap, but the story is better)

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9. disaster at the funfair

Liam's P.O.V: when Dylan came downstairs and sat opposite little Eleanor I could tell they were kicking each other underneath the table when suddenly Dylan groaned and she laughed. “that wasn't very nice,” I said to her.

She apologized, but I knew she didn't mean it. The doorbell rang. “I'll get it,” said little Eleanor and ran to the door. “JOSH!” she shouted. I went into the hallway just as they were hugging. They were best friends. “hey Josh,” I said. He smiled and nodded at me. “how do you find being a teenager?” he asked Eleanor. She sighed “why does everyone keep asking me that question?” she moaned. We both just laughed and headed into the kitchen. Little eleanor finished her pancakes and all the girls left. “we're all going out,” Louis announced. “where?” I asked him. “there's a fairground down in the field,” said Josh. “FUNFAIR!!” harry shouted. “harry,” eleanor moaned. “sorry, funfair,” he whispered making us all laugh. “ok, but you don't really think I am letting you lot loose in a fun fair.” I said. “I'll invite Dani and Paul,” I explained. “fine,” they all moaned. When we got there. We split into four group. All the girls had come too. Paul didn't come in the end. Zayn went off with little mix. Harry went off with Taylor and Louis and big Eleanor. I was with Dani, Niall Josh and little Eleanor. Eleanor and Josh ran off towards the roller-coaster and Niall ran off towards the food stall. “DANI WATCH NIALL!” I shouted to her. She ran off with him and I ran off after Josh and Eleanor. I heard someone scream. I ran even quicker. I saw it immediately. Louis and Harry were just getting off the roller-coaster. We all saw it. Louis's Dad had a gun pointed at Eleanor, and Josh was lying on the floor. “Josh,” she cried and knelt down beside him. I then noticed Dylan standing next to their Dad, but he wasn't smiling. He had a black eye and his lip was swollen. Wait where was Charlie. “DAD!!” Louis shouted and charged towards him. He started punching him. “LIAM HELP ME!!” Eleanor shouted. I knelt down beside her and saw a large cut on the back of Josh's head. She had his head in her lap and was stroking his hair. I ripped the sleeve off my shirt and wrapped it around Josh's head. Their Dad had got Louis on the floor. He was in pain. Harry was next to him. The girls were crying and Zayn and Niall had gone to get help. The Dad had the gun pointing at Eleanor again. He was about to pull the trigger. “DAD NO!!” it was Dylan. He dived in front of the bullet and got shot instead. The Dad ran off as soon as the police came. “I FOUND CHARLIE!!” it was Dani. She had got her out of his car. Josh had woken up and Eleanor was now crying over dylan. They had never got on but now he had saved her life and there was a possibility that he was going to die.

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