my new family~ COMPLETED

well, Eleanor Jones. was happy until her mum died of cancer and her Dad and Older brother got drunk every night. her other older brother left and she was left looking after her baby sister. her Dad and brother beat her every nigh and day. what happens when she has enough and ends up being reunited with her brother who left her and also happens to be in the biggest boy band in the world. (soz its crap, but the story is better)


8. birthday



Eleanor's P.O.V: Louis woke me up around nine am. “get up get up,” he said.

“fine,” I moaned and got out of the bed. I went to the wardrobe and grabbed my favourite red and white striped shirt and blue chinos. “hurry up, I've got a surprise for you” said Louis. I slipped on my red converse and put my hair into a messy bun. “you ready?” asked Louis “yeah, what is it?” I replied. “it's a surprise,” said Louis and quickly tied a blindfold over my eyes. “i hate surprises,” I moaned. Louis just laughed. “can't you remember what day it is?” said Louis. “whats so special about the 28th of august?” I said. Then I remembered. “ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY!” shouted Louis and pulled the blindfold off. “SURPRISE!” I saw all the boys running at me and hugging me. “aww guys you shouldn't have,” I said swatting them away. “tough,” said Niall and picked me up over his shoulder and carried me into the garden. “Niall put me down now,” I demanded. “ok,” he replied and threw me into the pool. “NIALL!!” I shouted. The boys dived in with me.”happy birthday,” Harry whispered in my ear and kissed me on the cheek. “thanks,” I said and hugged all of the boys. I woke up on the sofa. The boys were watching the X factor. My head was in Louis's lap and my legs were stretched across Harry and Niall. I sat up and groaned. My head hurt and my stomach ached and my nose was sore. “You've got the flu,” said Louis. “oh,” I replied and laid back down. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. “I'll get it,' said Zayn and got up and headed to the door. It was Perrie Zayn's girlfriend and the rest of little mix, Dani Liam's Girlfriend, Eleanor Louis's Girlfriend and Taylor Harry's Girlfriend. “hey,” I said and sniffed. “hey babes whats up,” said Eleanor and sat on the arm of the sofa. “flu,” I said. “oh,” she replied and stroked my hair. “PRESENT TIME!!” shouted Harry. “harry,' I moaned. “sorry,” he said. “present time,” he whispered. We all laughed and him and Niall went out of the room and came back with armfuls of presents. Everyone cheered and I smiled and sat up. “open mine first,” said Louis and passed one to me. I opened it and it was a t shirt saying 'I've got the best brother in the world'. Everyone laughed and I elbowed him in the ribs. He handed me a box. I opened and it was a silver necklace saying Eleanor. I smiled. He ruffled my hair and helped me put it on. Niall gave me his next. I opened it and it was a sweatshirt with a red guitar on the back and a musical note on the front. Next was Zayn. He gave me the latest Fifa game. I laughed. “you do know I'm going to beat you at this as well,” I said. Everyone just laughed. I opened Liam's. It was a pair of Blue converse. “Thanks Liam,” I said and smiled at him. Next it was the girls. Little Mix had given me four teddy bears. One red, one purple, one pink and one blue. “look on the back,” said Perrie. I looked on the back. They all had names. Scarlet, rose, violet and indigo. I smiled and said Thanks. Dani gave me a t shirt with musical notes on and Eleanor gave me a locket. I opened it and cringed at the picture. Louis had a look and laughed. It was on the night where I'd slept over at Eleanor's and She'd taken pictures of me while I was asleep. Taylor had given me a card and a ten pound voucher for Hmv. I thanked her. Finally it was Harry, I picked up the box he had given me and opened it. It was an Iphone 5 with one of those photo cases. It was a picture of me, him and Louis from when we went to the park and we'd all fell in the pond. We were all sopping wet. It was so funny. I hugged him and thanked him he ruffled my hair and I leaned back and rested my head on his shoulder. We all just watched TV and me and Eleanor put some music on my phone and I got all their numbers. We were all yawning so we all sorted out sleeping arrangements. Taylor had to go home so it was me, Harry, Louis and Eleanor. Liam, Niall and Zayn. And Dani and little mix. Me and Eleanor listened to music on my phone and Harry and Louis played my Fifa game. Today was the best birthday ever. I woke up next to Eleanor, Louis and Harry had fell asleep on the floor. I still had the flu. I hated being ill, it was horrible. I put on the t-shirt Louis had given me, my sweatshirt a pair of red chinos and my blue converse. I tripped over Harry and fell on top of him and Louis. We all groaned. Eleanor woke up and saw us. “are you alright?” she asked us. “no I'm dying,” I groaned. “same,” added Harry. “I got your foot in my balls,” moaned Louis. “sorry,” I said and helped him up. We all headed downstairs. “PANCAKES!” shouted Harry. “harry,” I moaned. “sorry, pancakes,” he whispered. That always made me laugh. Suddenly Niall pounced on me and lifted me over his shoulder. “how does it feel being a teenager,” he said. “put me down now,” I demanded. He put me down and Liam passed me a plate of pancakes. Dylan came down the stairs and sat opposite me. We both immediately started a kicking fight and I kicked him in the balls. He groaned and I laughed. “that wasn't nice,” said Liam. “sorry,” I said to him. He was so sensible he was the dad of the 1D family and Dani was the mum. I wasn't sorry at all though. Dylan deserved everything he got. See how he liked it.

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