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The day Emily got born her dad died in a car accident. Her mom died shortly after giving birth and the poor girl was left alone on this world. Luckily there was an adoption centre that took her until she was seven. As she turned three her powers started to show, her eyes turned bright green and every year they would change color. Every year her powers would change with her eyes.
As she got seven she got transferred to the Sight-School. It’s a school for people with powers and like everyone she got there by train. Unlucky as that day was, the train got an accident and everyone died. Except for her...
Now she lives in the woods, going to the little town close by for clothes and food once a month, she works, begs and does everything to stay alive. But she won’t live in the town, she will stay in the woods until she sees who killed all those children and almost, her.

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24. help!

Hey guys, i need your help.

It'll only work if you guys COMMENT!!!

because, what should i do first, just keep updating (and annoying myself) until the end of book one and THEN edit everything..?

 

or just un-annoy myself and start editing everything and then write more? 

 

i have the feeling that if i edit now (one chapter a week)  i'll be done in probably less then twenty weeks because i'll make the chapters longer, and i'd make the story much better, plus.. the remaining part of the story will be.. like.. ten times better..

 

so.. your choice.. please comment! And help me out

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