Desmond Martel is a 23 year old detective. The story is about when a school head teacher goes missing. His journey leads him through readherrings and deceitful teachers. Luckily he has got his friend Lance to lend a hand.

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1. It Begins

At seven o'clock Desmond was on the way to his office.As the sun started to shine its first rays of sun over the dewy grass; Desmond descended down the stairs into the dingy room. To his surprise he found his friend, Lance, already there; waiting patiently for him to arrive.

“Morning,” said Lance eagerly

“Good Morning”, replied Desmond

“So, what the problem this time,” Lance said enthusiastically “Missing Jewellery? Vanishing Pets? Annoying Neighbours?”

“Nope, No and Nope again, in fact it is a matter which I am surprised you have not read about in the paper”, Desmond stops; then extracts a cutting from his pocket and places it on the desk in the centre of the room. He sat down and gestured for Lance to do the same; he then offered Lance the cutting.

For the next few minutes, there was nothing but silence. Lance read it to himself:

Mr Newberry, head of Wiltshire Downs Secondary School, mysteriously vanished on Thursday April 18th. He had been seen entering the College that Morning by Staff. However, no one saw him from 1:50 PM on wards  No Staff or Students saw him leave the College. Staff are wondering whether someone may have kidnapped him

Lance finished reading. He then turned towards Desmond in disbelief.

“What kind of person would do this? I can’t imagine what has driven someone to do this? I mean, everyone knows him and likes him. I-I-I just can’t see why anyone would hurt him.” spluttered Lance.

“Someone who had a grudge?” replied Desmond after a moment’s pause “Whoever it is they’re not getting away from ME or YOU! First things first; let us visit the scene of the crime.”


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