The Darkness Within~Zayn Malik Fan Fiction~

Abigail Rose Cartwright is just out of high school and is happy that she gets to live with her best friend, Madeline Scott. To celebrate, the girls have been planning for their night out in Bradford. When Abigail meets someone that she was forced to, everything goes wrong when their dark pasts collide.


10. Chapter 10:

***Madeline's P.O.V.***

Going to the mall is always fun, but when you're alone, without your best friend or she's more like my sister; but either way it sucks. I'm so alone now. Abigail's got Zayn and I'm all alone and traumatised. I mean, I'm not jealous of Abbie and Zayn. Of course not! I'm happy for them. But Abbie and I barely hang out anymore. She's either at work with Zayn. Maybe it's just me; I need to get a job. Or a proper boyfriend. I let out a sigh and I'm not focusing on where I'm going so I slam into somebody, spilling the bottle of water I had in my hand all over him, "Oh my God! I'm so sorry! I'm on a different planet." I let out a small giggle. I look up and meet beautiful blue/green eyes. Wow. They're beautiful, "It's okay. I can clean it up." the boy smiles at me

"It's my fa-" I try to protest but he cuts me off

"Sweetie, it's fine. I can clean it up." he takes the napkins out of my hands and I feel a little jolt of electricity from his touch, "My name is Louis." he smiles as he dries his shirt

"Madeline." I return the smile

"That's such a cool name!" he shouts and people walking past us send glares, "Got a nickname for Madeline?"

"Maddy." I giggle, "Got a nickname for Louis?" I copy him

"Yeah, a few. Tommo, Boo Bear, and Lou is the most popular among my mates, so, call me Lou." he shrugs

"Alrighty, Lou." I wink

''Why don't you give me a bell sometime soon okay?" he pulls out a pen and writes down his number on one of the napkins

"Oh...okay." I look at the number then back at Louis

"See you soon, Maddy!" he winks at me then walks off

 Louis is really cute and seems sweet. He wore a blue striped shirt, red chinos that rolled up to his ankles and Toms. I'll definitely be calling this guy. I pull out my phone to save Louis's number but it's blasting with messages and missed calls from Abbie.

From: Abbie:

Where the hell are you?! Why aren't you answering me?! Goddammit Madeline!

To: Abbie:

Jeez... What the hell is wrong with you?

I sigh and immediately get a reply from her

From: Abbie:

What's wrong with me?! What's wrong with YOU?! I'm not gonna fight like this. Where are you?

To: Abbie:

The mall

I head to the parking lot and get into my car. Just as I pull out of my spot, Louis taps on my window. I roll it down and Louis smiles real big, "Do you um..." he scratches the back of his neck, "Do you wanna go out for dinner with me?" he sheepishly asks

"Sure! What time?" I jump in my seat and smile

"At around 7 o'clock and can you text me your address so I can pick you up?"

"Oh yeah, of course! I'll text it to you when I get home." I smile

"Okay. See you tonight, sweetie!" he winks and I giggle

"See you tonight." I wave then drive off.

When I got home, I notice that Abigail's car is missing. Shit! She must've gone to the mall to get me and I didn't tell her that I was coming home. As if on cue, she calls me, "Where are you?" she snaps

"At home." I say with a small voice

"And you didn't bother telling me?" she sighs, "Stay. Put. Can you do that? I'm on my way." she hangs up on me.

I sit on the couch and watch TV. After a few minutes of watching some cheesy movie, I hear tires screech outside. That's obviously Abigail, and she's not happy. She bursts through the door ad stands in front of the TV, "What the hell is wrong with you?!" she yells, "You think you can just run off like that and not tell me where you're going?!"

"I'm 18, Abigail, and you're not my mother." I spit

"But you know pretty damn well that I care so much about you!"

"That doesn't mean you have to know where I am every fucking second of every day!" I yell, standing up


"I have a date tonight. At 7 o'clock." I cut her off

"What. The. Hell?"

"Deal with it! You can't control me!" I yell with tears rolling down my cheeks. I run into my room, slam and lock the door behind me. I lie down on my belly on my bed and text Louis. We had a nice long conversation. Maybe Louis is the one I'm looking for...

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