My Immortal Comentary

This is a commentary of the infamous My Immortal. Do not own (thank god) Note! Swearing, cutting, bad lemons and horrible grammar. The last two are grave offences

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5. Someone Fucking kill me

Chapter 5.

AN: STOP flaming! if u flam it menz ur a prep or a posr! Da only reson Dumbledeor swor is coz he had a hedache ok an on tup of dat he wuz mad at dem 4 having sexx! PS im nut updating umtil I get five good revoiws! Actually, that’s smart. We’ll give them to you for lulz.

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Dumbledore made and Draco and I follow him. He kept shouting at us angrily.

“You ludacris fools!” he shouted. Get a fucking spell check child

I started to cry tears of blood down my pallid face. Draco comforted me. When we went back to the castle Dumbledore took us to Professor Snape and Professor McGonagall who were both looking very angry. Well yes, they would be angry if their students were in the FORRBIDDEN forest having sex.

“They were having sexual intercourse in the Forbidden Forest!” he yelled in a furious voice.

“Why did you do such a thing, you mediocre dunces?” asked Professor McGonagall. ……heh gonads

“How dare you?” demanded Professor Snape.

And then Draco shrieked. “BECAUSE I LOVE HER!” I feel sorry for you, but you still had horribly written sex so yeah, no pity from me. Just a chainsaw

Everyone was quiet. Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall still looked mad but Professor Snape said. “Fine. Very well. You may go up to your rooms.” WHAT?! You have to fucking punish them! Bunch of pussies!

Draco and I went upstairs while the teachers glared at us. I won’t just glare at the screen I will set it on fire as well. Wait I can’t do that, it’s the school computer

“Are you okay, Ebony?” Draco asked me gently.

“Yeah I guess.” I lied. I went to the girl’s dorm and brushed my teeth and my hair and changed into a low-cut black floor-length dress with red lace all around it and black high heels. Why are you getting dressed up to sleep? When I came out….

Draco was standing in front of the bathroom, and he started to sing ‘I just wanna live’ by Good Charlotte. I was so flattered, even though he wasn’t supposed to be there. We hugged and kissed. After that, we said goodnight and he reluctantly went back into his room. 

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