Loved You First (A Louis Tomlinson And Harry Styles Fanfic)

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Ally has been best friends with Louis Tomlinson since they were babies. They spent everyday together until Louis moved to England to do x-factor. It's been three years since they've seen each other. They still kept in touch over the phone but they never seen each other since Louis left. One day Ally wakes up and finds out shes moving to England. Once she reunites with Louis, she meets the other boys from One Direction. Louis has always loved Ally and still does but he always kept it to himself. When he's about to tell Ally how he feels..his best mate, Harry asks her to be his girlfriend and Ally says yes. This caused nothing but trouble. Who will Ally choose? Louis or Harry?

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16. That was...Unexpected

-Authors Note-
Okey so I had a chapter before this but I deleted it cause I didnt like it! I felt like  i rushed and all so im sorry bout that! It was really bad in my opinion! But Imma redo it right now and I promise itll be way better.(:

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(Ally's POV)

   Harry and I have been dating for three weeks now. In two weeks he'd be off of break and back to doing concerts everynight. I really had no idea how that was going to work out. We havent even talked about it yet. But whatever for now. I wanna enjoy the time we have now. Anyways, I was laying on the couch with my head in Harry's lap as he played with my hair. We weren't watching any television or anything. We were just enjoing a small talk. After an hour, we got quiet and ran out of things to talk about. I couldnt help but stop thinking about Louis. He's been locked up in his room for more than a week now. He hasnt came out to do anything except use the restroom and grab some food. I was worried. No one has spoken to him ever since.

  Harry noticed the worried look on me when he asked,''Whats wrong babe?" "Just worried for Louis. Do you think I should go up and check on him?" I asked. "He's not going to let you in,'' Harry replied. He had a point. I have tried before to get to talk to Louis but he just rejected me each time. "I'll make it happen this time,'' I smirked while getting up. "Should I come?" Harry asked getting up as well. I shook my head and kissed him on the cheeck. "Not yet,'' I said as he sat back down.

   I walked upstairs to Louis' room and knocked on the door. "Louis, can I come in?" I asked. "No,'' he mummbled in a voice that sounded as if he was crying. Why was he crying? "I'm not going to give up. You know me. Open up please,'' I asked again. I got no response that time. "Louis William Tomlinson open this door right now,'' I demanded but couldnt help but laugh a bit at the end. By my surprise, the door opened. Revealing on the other side was anti-Louis. His eyes were streaming rivers, he looked as if he didnt even care to make himself look presentable, and his signature smile was gone. He walked back to his bed and sat down not saying  a word. I rushed beside him to hug him. "What happened!?" I asked. "Nothing Ally,'' he mummered. "This isnt nothing,'' I said looking into his eyes. "You're right. It's nothing,'' he replied dully. "Come on Louis! We been best friends since childhood! Please tell me,'' I pleaded. I hated seeing him like this.

  He shifted his body so he was facing towards me. He whispered something but I couldnt make it out. "What?" I asked. He shook his head. "I wanna help,'' I replied. He let out a long sigh and met my eyes. "If you wanna help then please let me do what I want to do,'' he said. "And what would that be?" I wondered. "This,'' he answered leaning in closer. His eyes met down at my lips and once we were just an inch apart. I knew what was coming, I just couldnt get myself to move. He looked back at my eyes and then back down to my lips. Then..basically..we kissed. After a few seconds we realeased and made eye contact. "You have no idea how much I wanted to do that,'' he smiled big. I was frozen and had no idea what do say. "Next time close the door would you?" snapped an angry Harry. Before I could object, he stormed off to his room and slammed the door behind him. I looked back at Louis who was still smiling until I slapped him right across the face. That was unexpected.

 

-Authors Note-

Im more confident with this chapter compared to the one i deleted.(:
 

Sorry for the short chapter but I wanted to fix it fast.

Louis kissed Ally. Harry saw. Ally slappeed Louis.

trust me , Things are starting to kick off and become dramatic.

 

Thanks to everyone whose reading, it means alot!(:  Please likeee/favorite. <3


 

 

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