Loved You First (A Louis Tomlinson And Harry Styles Fanfic)

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Ally has been best friends with Louis Tomlinson since they were babies. They spent everyday together until Louis moved to England to do x-factor. It's been three years since they've seen each other. They still kept in touch over the phone but they never seen each other since Louis left. One day Ally wakes up and finds out shes moving to England. Once she reunites with Louis, she meets the other boys from One Direction. Louis has always loved Ally and still does but he always kept it to himself. When he's about to tell Ally how he feels..his best mate, Harry asks her to be his girlfriend and Ally says yes. This caused nothing but trouble. Who will Ally choose? Louis or Harry?


25. Concert

(Harry's POV) 
   There's times like this where I wish you could really stop the tape a rewind. Ally and I were having a great time, but of course management and their be on time rules. Once Ally and I arrived, believe it or not, but the boys were already on stage singing C'mon C'mon. I felt kind of betrayed because we're One Direction. We never went on without another. I brushed it off and I was met by Paul who had his arms crossed and was tapping his left foot while looking straight at me. I intervined my fingers with Ally's and walked towards Paul.


      "You're la-'' Paul started but I cut him off. "Yeah, yeah wont happen again,'' I replied. It was kind of obvious that I was late. I wasnt up for another tardy lecture. "You said that last time Harry,'' he sighed. Ally started moving her thumb in a circle motion on the back of my hand to confort me. I shot her a smile when Paul added,''I get it that you want a love life as well. But you have a job as well. Third strike and we can't have this anymore,'' Paul said motioning to Ally and I. I nodded understandingly and he handed me over my microphone and left. Ally turned towards me. "Good luck,'' she smiled. "Thanks babe, I love you,'' I replied kissing her on the cheek then joining the other guys on stage.

(Ally's POV) 
    I listened to One Direction sing live for the first time. They're really good! They're voices are like perfect. Your argument is invalid. I was singing along when I felt a gentle tap on my shoulder. I turned around to face two girls. One with really, really curly hair and another with blonde hair. "You must be Eleanor, Harry's girlfriend,'' the curly haired one smiled. I nodded instantly recognizing them as Danielle and Perrie, Liam and Zayn's girlfriend. "And you must be Danielle and Perrie. Its nice to meet you,'' I greeted them each with a quick hug. "So how are you and Harry going?" Perrie asked. "Pretty good, he's really sweet,'' I answered. Thinking about Harry just made my heart race. I really did love him.

  Danielle, Perrie, and I got to know each other and once the concert was over, the boys closed with the song 'Loved You First'. It honestly was one of my favorites from the Take Me Home album. During Louis' solo though, the three of us noticed Louis' voice crack as if he was crying. Why was he crying? Once they finished the crowd cheered and the boys ran backstage to us. Harry instantly ran towards me and picked me up in a grand hug. "How'd I do!?" he asked smiling when letting go. "Really good, you all did,'' I gave them all a thumbs up. When my eyes landed on Louis I noticed a bit of tears escaping his eyes. Even though it was akward between us, I just wanted tto make him feel better. "Are you okay Louis?" I asked. He looked up towards mine and Harry's direction and then walked off. I started to follow him but Harry held my hand back. "He'll be alright after some time,'' he assured. "He just needs some time alone.''



(Louis' POV)

    "Are you okay Louis?" Ally asked. I looked towards the cuddled up Harry and Ally and couldnt take it anymore. I walked off towards the dressing room and locked the door behind me. We just had to sing Loved You First didnt we? That song explains exactly how I feel about Ally. Those should be our our fingers intervined, our kisses, and me telling her every night that she's the one and that I'll never let her go. That should be me in Harry's position. I've waited too long to say it. And now her heart's taken and nothing could be worse.


-Authors Note-

tomorrow's the last day of school! But guess what? I have to finish an exam tomorrow... >.< Anyways hope you liked this chapter and if you havent already please like/fav/fan(: A simple press of a button really does mean alot(:

Also if you didnt see last night's mumble here it is:

So I thought of an idea where I start an Elounor movella but its not technically a one whole story. It'll be like imagines/perferences stuff like that where you can take part as well. You could comment a Elounor prompt for me to do and I will post it up. Whose interested and thinks I should do this? Please let me know:) x

Example on what im talking about - say someone commented "Can you write one where Eleanor feels insecure about herself and Louis makes her feel better?"
And then i'll do that, once im done with that one i'll move on to the other prompts commented.




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